The 10th graders in our school are taking a big writing test on Tuesday, and today, the teacher showed us examples of each one of the point values, like what would get you 1 point, 2, 3, ect. And the one paper that got 1 point was pretty funny, because of how bad it was, so I thought I'd post it here, it isn't that funny unless you read it out loud. :) Feel free to try and translate the more confusing parts.
P.S. All the spelling errors and stuff are supposed to be there, that's part of the reason it's so funny.
When I was litte girl with with ten years old, I like to muchplay to the left of the river, the river is were I'm born. I liked because had alot arena and space for play. Alot of people went to play and they don't need to tell to the others people that they want to played because had alot of space for played many people. I liked to play out of the river because the air is fresh and the sun is shany. And went I was played and we have hungry we maked food for eat together and we ate and then we went to played again. I was happy because I slopt two time and nothing happen because arena like soil. And went you sept in the floor you get to much pain but not in the arena. I want to go back to play left to the river because right there was to fun and I was with my friend and family amd I want to do thas again. I played like Free I don't neet to garry if I proke some windows or others thins I like to much to play in some place that don't have thinks I like to play in some place lake outside that has plants and fresh air and the sun shuny. I will do that again some day when I go back to mexico and do all kind this thinkg fun.
:lol: you put a little to much mistakes in it... don't think a little girl, who seems to know how to spell, would make that many mistakes.
I didn't put any in, see was actually a 10th grader, that came from last years tests, she was just writing about when she was 10 years old I guess.
:p That was pretty funny. Can't believe it was a tenth grader. If she was in tenth grade she prob didnt know english very well.
Lol. How long had she been in America?
probably two days......ish?