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kennyboy000

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#1 10 years ago

I've been working , Well .. Just started working on a new Full-time Comic. I for example .. Run into an imp in the story , End it there. And give 3 options or so. Example : The player has run into a huge demon.: A. Try to fight it B. Shoot the barrels next to it. C. Make a run for it. Ofcourse there can be more options or less at times,I don't really know what its called.. But this is the start so it's lame IMO. The newer, The more action probably ! This time no vote. Just introduction , Sorry ! :) ________________________________________________________________________________ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/CharIntroduction.jpg (Picture of the Comic. But this isn't part of the story) HC (HardChase) : Hello, I am Kenneth Davids, My soldier name was HardChase .. And this is my story.; In the early years when i was still a marine on earth .. I found a wounded man, Unable to speak .. I tried to hold his wounds, It was .. Burned .. By some kind of plasma .. But there was no sign of anything strange .. Only some Satanic Mark .. Kids these days *shakes his head* .. *lays a picture on the table* http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part15.jpg Sinse that day i had nightmares of.. Shadows , I got thrown out of the army because i "Said Lies" .. They know nothing about it .. Most guys followed me out ... Some got another job. Karmaz , Seplim and Me took a job as security guards at some science post investigating strange things .. The sciencetists that work here are nuts .. But its good painment .. Strangely enough on a random day Zema joined this post as a ScienceGuy .. Heh .. I still find him funny looking in a Labcoat , Anyway ! I'll show you some pictures of the guys .. http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part14.jpg Thats Zema and Me fighting over something and got suprised by a picture .. http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part13.jpg Sergeant Striker and Clain .. They stayed .. I can't blame them , Really .. Well .. Bye ! *walks off* _______________________________________________________________________________ --------------------------------------The Outpost.---------------------------- _______________________________________________________________________________ http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part1.jpg (Hardchase at the Outpost) *Whistles as he is standing guard at the Outpost* *He looks at his gun* http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part2.jpg *He then goes to face Karmaz* http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part3.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part4.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part5.jpg Karmaz : What is it ? HC : Eh , Nevermind .. I'm gonna go see Seplim .. Karmaz : Alright .. You should take a walk, Check if everything is okay. HC : Hehe, Will do. Don't get cought by some crazy-experiment chickens or something .. Karmaz : .. Just go ! HC : *Chuckles* HC : *Turns around walking over to Seplim* http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part6.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part7.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part8.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part9.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part10.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part11.jpg http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z306/kennyboy000/TemplarSquad/Part12.jpg HC : Hi man , I'm gonna check everything, Wanna join me ? Seplim : No, Sorry man. Gotta get this camera working. It went out in sector 4, Hallway B. HC : I'll check it out if you want ? Seplim : Would be great .. HC : See ya later, Keep an eye out on the other camera's . Seplim : Will do .. ((Sorry that it isnt so good, It'll be better once i found a way to actualy show the pictures :/ Instead of links .. )) Please comment ..




kennyboy000

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#2 10 years ago

(Part 2 with choise is almost ready. First need some comments on this one ! :) )




Dafama2k7

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#3 10 years ago

Interesting, i like the shots and the story !!!




Nitronumber9

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#4 10 years ago

Interesting storyline to this. But its lacking character development. Its also lacking a killer hook.

But overall a good start.




kennyboy000

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#5 10 years ago

Killer Hook ? Like action, Well. I'm gonna work on my second part. You guys have to vote this time, So check this topic recent ! :) Thanks for the Comments so far guys :) And Doom3 Is ALOT More limited then Gmod. So i'm doing my best .. I can't post and so. Thats a major problem




kennyboy000

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#6 10 years ago

srpam :: View Forum - Templar Squad Comic (D3) I will work on it later,I have to go afk now. Plus a good thing is, You will be able to view the Pictures without having to link ! It'll take some time to work on. But it'll do




kennyboy000

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#7 10 years ago

It is done ! Please Register and Vote there ! If the website isnt working it is probably your firewall. But i can assure you it has no virusses :) How else could the other people on it be there then? ^_-




Dafama2k7

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#8 10 years ago

What's GMod ???




kennyboy000

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#9 10 years ago

Gmod/Garrymod is a mod on Steam that lets you build your own things and so .. You should search Videos on YouTube :) Still waiting for more votes 0:0:3 At The Moment :) the 3 is C.