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#1 14 years ago

www.purevolume.com/vagabond

I would like some level-headed critiqes by fellow musicians!

Please give me insight on what I need to improve upon.




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#2 14 years ago

Wow! I'm listening to Pimp Shuffle right now, and it's very stylish and cool sounding. Very well done!

Edit: And Cartoon is very bouncy and fun!




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#3 14 years ago

Cool stuff.




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#4 14 years ago

Sounds like that crappy music they used on Super Mario and some other games for SNES...

Its creative, but it blows.




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#5 14 years ago

By the way, you stole that 3rd song off Family Guy, when Peter asks for his own theme song from the Genie.




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#6 14 years ago
DriverBy the way, you stole that 3rd song off Family Guy, when Peter asks for his own theme song from the Genie.

It's just one line...

And thanks for the critique! It really helped me further my skills...:rolleyes:




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#7 14 years ago

Hi jeffbrak. I like to do some music too :)

I play electric/acoustic guitar, rock/metal/blues/acoustic styles. I'm gonna post my oppinions & constructive suggestions.

The 1st song sounds very synthetic/mechanic, as if it were made at 80', because the sound of electric guitar seems to be played with the keyboard instead with an elec. guitar. It's not bad if you was looking for that kind of sound. It isn't a bad song. These tempo changes at the end of the song sounds estrange, I suppose will be a "more conventional" song if the end where "less estrange". Your voice is good for that kind of music ;)

2nd song is the best in my oppinion, because it sounds more natural. But I suppose is not a song for an MTv broadcast ;)

3rd Very game console music.

Anyway, all musicians know how difficult is to write, record & produce a song, so, congratulations for your compositions!! Continue with your work, is nice to write/perform/record music, and is good to listen it too :)




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#8 14 years ago

RantamHi jeffbrak. I like to do some music too :)

I play electric/acoustic guitar, rock/metal/blues/acoustic styles. I'm gonna post my oppinions & constructive suggestions.

The 1st song sounds very synthetic/mechanic, as if it were made at 80', because the sound of electric guitar seems to be played with the keyboard instead with an elec. guitar. It's not bad if you was looking for that kind of sound. It isn't a bad song. These tempo changes at the end of the song sounds estrange, I suppose will be a "more conventional" song if the end where "less estrange". Your voice is good for that kind of music ;)

2nd song is the best in my oppinion, because it sounds more natural. But I suppose is not a song for an MTv broadcast ;)

3rd Very game console music.

Anyway, all musicians know how difficult is to write, record & produce a song, so, congratulations for your compositions!! Continue with your work, is nice to write/perform/record music, and is good to listen it too :)

Thank you for taking the time to write this! I really appriciate it! :cya:




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#9 14 years ago

Hey I am a fellow musician too but am at work right now so not able to listen until I get home. So I guess I am just posting to say I will give you some feedback later... Also I noticed your note on that page that says you are having problems getting the drums programmed properly to which I would ask if you know how to quantize in Sonar (that is your sequencer I presume?) because if you do you can fix up the little timing errors you get while recording the midi parts in!

I have some of my older work online over here http://modularjack.iuma.com but for those of you who don't like electronic music don't bother listening cause it is almost entirely sampled and synthesized music except for Longing feat. Tim Gerber on the album2 section.




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#10 14 years ago

There pretty neat, i have no probs except the lyrics are bad. "every dog has its day and today is the day" that just a little excerpt talmost 90 percent of the lyrics sucked.




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