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Zapex

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#221 10 years ago

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Ḷëģöläš-OLD

You'll never walk alone.

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#222 10 years ago
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a good overall signature but lets look into it a bit shall we ?

Ok first, creepy with two faces, second i think it is a little unbalanced, right side is too heavy and left is too open, the "bubbles" for i have no other word to call them on the left are very choppy and look thrown on to add to the left side. Although, great work with the lighting, it does flow correctly.




Zapex

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#223 10 years ago

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Ser Rets

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#224 10 years ago

Pretty Nice Zapex, Im just not sure about the right side being a lot darker than the left side but Im a Fan of Symmetry and often spend years trying to get Text completely symmetrical.

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The Drunk Demoman

Sexy Scottish Cyclops

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#225 10 years ago

Gonna have to give it 3/10. It's way too much filter raped. 1z4wvpw.png




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#226 9 years ago

Ser Rets;5254813Pretty Nice Zapex, Im just not sure about the right side being a lot darker than the left side but Im a Fan of Symmetry and often spend years trying to get Text completely symmetrical.

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Holllaaaa, I'm supposed to be writing a paper. But I'm not. Ha.

I'd give this a 5/10. It shows some good elements, but its still out of balance. First, I like the sharpening, and even your choice of blues/greens. But, the exposure throws the lighting off because you've carried it across the middle like crazy. Second, you've picked a really weird focal as in.. I don't know what to focus on. Think hocus focus, not hocus pocus :) Kill the text annnnd yeah :)




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#227 8 years ago
Here are some of my works. I have numbered them so you can post about them more easy.

#1

Moon Lit Kitchen
This was a shot I did to brush up on my lighting and rendering shills.

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The Kelt Knight

I wanted to make a cartoon style kid that is in grown up knight cloths.

Back Story on the character

Billy has always dreamed of a magical land, far away from the hustle and bustle of New York City. One day while daydreaming, Billy finds himself in his magical land, where he is forced to usurp the evil king. During his quest, he discovers that the evil king has also kidnapped his older sister and this only furthers his determination. While searching for his lost sister, he transforms into the Kelt Knight and succeeds in defeating the evil king and turns control of the land back over to the people.

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#3

Ogre

Work in Progress

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#4

Train
Work in Progress

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Wire Frame

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