as soon as i go to College, im gonna create the worlds greatest video games in all of the history of history. Zombie Hotel: The Damned Nation Storyline: Narrator:Once, lived down deep in hell, there was a demon lord, who ever he looked at, would die, even people who are dead. One day, the Demon's Curse lived in one of the finest Hotels, *****, but, when someone entered their room for the first time, the demon's ghost, had haunted that room, the numbers were then switched to 1408, for the bad luck inside, but all the people who died, came to life and now the Hotel and the City, is a Barren Wastland, Every building torn down, nothing left of that city, now, even the ghosts voice goes into everyones minds, saying, You must come, come to the city of my Domain, and be warned, you insects, if you dont come, all your lives, will be over. for once you dont enter, then my Zombies will spread, so act fast if you want to live. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Chapter 1: Enter the city Commander: We got into the City, now spread out, find this Demon ***hole, and we can get out of here! Do I make myself clear! Do as I say. And remem... WTH was that? Searge, get over there and check it out! And lets mo AUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHH!*dies* Private:OMG, WTH are we gonna do now!? (Talking to the leader of the S.W.A.T.)Sir, I dont know what we can do without a leading Commander, you need to send more troops... Wait, Saerge just got killed, dend sombody, please?! Leader:Dont worry, Private, hold out until Bourne gets there(talking to himself)And if he gets there, i hope its now... Private: Guys, here they come! End of Chapter 1: Bourne: That takes care of that (he almost gets killed by a Zombie behind him, but sombody from S.W.A.T., helps him out. Her name was Anvilia, also known as Ageant0785)Oh, so your an Ageant, Anvilia:Yes, my name is Anvilia. your gonna need some help if your gonna do this all by yourself. Bourne:These guys aren't as you think, 0785, lets go! Anvilia:Right! Chapter 2:into the Hotel Bourne:Wow, this place is pretty **** ugly to me. Anvillia:well, it cant get any worse. OMG! Look at that!(8foot tall Zombie walks up to them)Shoot! No, its not working! Run! End of Chapter 2: Bourne:We need to go back, there keys under the desk Demon:(Talking in his head)You need the keys to unlock the door in the seconed Floor to find the Head of the last person who ever dared to come here. Bourne:Come on! Chapter 3: On the Seconed Floor Bourne:Well, were here. Demon: find the Breakfeast area on this floor. There you will find the key to the room number 2300, it is the last room till the third floor. Anvillia: Great, more Running and shooting. End of Chapter three: Anvillia: Ok, weve got the head, so now what?(the floor breaks and she falls in to the pool room into the water) Bourne:NO!! Demon:If u must, Save her Chapter 4: The Dead Pool Bourne: Anvillia! Anvillia! Zombie: BLALALA(Gets shot) Bourne: where the **** are you, Anvillia!(he dives in to the water, and sees her but Zombies try to get her) End of Chapter 4: Bourne:Are you alright? Anvillia:im... fine... Demon:Now, Come to the top floor, the fifth floor, to room 1408, and end my torent. I need to die, come and kill me, before your time runs out... Chapter 5:The final Gamble Bourne: Alright, Demon. how about we settle this Demon: I must not Stare at you, youll die, and if you try to kill me, the Zombies will kill you, i want you to do this so i do not bother this reatched earth again. Zombie:AH! HAHA! End of Chapter 5: Bourne: I guess thats it, all that was evil is dead. Anvillia: and now we can live in Harmoney... (they kiss) How did you like it?
Too much talking, not enough killing. NEED MOAR BLOOD!
So, speaking in hours of gameplay, how many? 5,10,20?
Wait, the Narrator is the storyline? Did you give us the storyline?
Sounds good! Though I think, in personal opinion, that the story needs a bit of work. The 1408 think should be out..... the rest is okay, with minor tweaking!
Not to be too blunt, but I hate it.