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Spoink4life

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#1 11 years ago

im thinking of a game called Atlas its a bit like prey but im thinking of atleast 4 differnt alien races end up on earth and a big war will happen so here is the story of it: it is the year 2035 and in a few minutes it will be the year 2036 one boy (Tyle woodsen i made the name up) was excited and was getting ready for the all night party in the main city square of chicargo, but all the greatest scientists of chicargo were gathering up and thinking of a new technology to travel to differnt worlds, this technology is called portal travelling.while in the city square everyone was gathering up for the final countdown, the scientists were ready for their testing( the portal travelling project in the year 2020) 5..4..3..2..1 the scientists switched on their portal but BANG! the portal got mixed up with the electricty power source to the city and the weather,while in the main city sqaure tyler was standing in the crow of screaming people wondering whats going on? and then suddenly a giant hole opened up in the sky everyone was watching closely as a giant ship came flying out and crashing into a nearby skyscraper whch ended up topling onto the city square but in the lab all hel broke loose the portal inside the leb opened up and then 6 gleaming red eyes were staring at the scientists the alien said something and started firing at the scientists but that was the beginning of a war... actually make that 2 wars in 1 war... so people what do you think of my game? can you tell me if it sounds good or not? thanks




McGuffin

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#2 11 years ago

Hmmm well overall its pretty good. However need a lil more work with the overall storyline of the game...And give us a little more of an insight to the whole host of charictors and things...




Mlncly_shrine

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#3 11 years ago

meh.... i dont really like it.




Homer Gonerson

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#4 11 years ago

Hmm... science experiment gone wrong, warps in aliens from another world. Half-Life anyone? And did you mean Chicago instead of Chicargo?




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#5 11 years ago

lol i guees so lol sorry if the game doesnt sound very good me and my m8s r still planning it i think i said somethin about a bit like prey and half life 2 i think but instead of the portals on a alien planet but instead are opening around the world and chicargo was the only city that came into my mind my mate charlie thought of las vegas but i thought people were gonnna start thinking we copied rainbow 6 vegas




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#6 11 years ago

and the character i chose is gonna be around the age 15-18 beacuse i want a differnt type of person not like a war soldier or a scientist o we chose a teenager




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#7 11 years ago

and when i said there will be 2 wars i mean by that is well i said there will be 4 differnt alien races and 2 of the 4 races are having a war allready so their war is coming on to earth its self i call one of the alien races a Kaarg cant think of another name for the other 3 but charlie(who is an artist who is drawing a kaarg) made up a another name called spherex which will be a robotic alien species




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#8 11 years ago

oh and mcguffin ill give you the background of the characters is Tyler woodsen is the main character who is average age is about 15 to 18 and the portals will happen through out the game like percy came up with a daft idea saying that a portal opens and half a fleet of the karg will crash into the eifle tower i think thats how you spell eifle tower... anyway tylers mum is dead and his dad Jakob woodsen is about 41 years old and we are planning him to have him killed off in the game.




mentalmagic

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#9 11 years ago

Argh, there's an edit button bottom right of your posts...

To be honest, the storyline sounds slightly cliched, how are you planning to make this game?




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#10 11 years ago

To be blunt, you need to learn how to use English before you attempt to design a game.




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