2 of my favorite poems :) 12 replies

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Makaveli96

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#1 13 years ago

The Rose That Grew From Concrete Did you hear about the rose that grew from a crack in the concrete? Proving nature's law is wrong it learned to walk with out having feet. Funny it seems, but by keeping it's dreams, it learned to breathe fresh air. Long live the rose that grew from concrete when no one else even cared. I Cry Sometimes when I'm alone I Cry, Cause I am on my own. The tears I cry are bitter and warm. They flow with life but take no form I Cry because my heart is torn. I find it difficult to carry on. If I had an ear to confiding, I would cry among my treasured friend, but who do you know that stops that long, to help another carry on. The world moves fast and it would rather pass by. Then to stop and see what makes one cry, so painful and sad. And sometimes... I Cry and no one cares about why. Author: Tupac Amaru Shakur so what you think of them?




Ryette

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#2 13 years ago

Wow. I think I've seen better on some random emo-kid's LiveJournal.




Red Menace

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#3 13 years ago

Tupac needed to stick to rap.


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Makaveli96

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#4 13 years ago

take the fact that he wrote those 2 poems at the age of 9 now thats considered a good poem by a nine year old




Ping_Pong

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#5 13 years ago
Red MenaceTupac needed to stick to rap.

We have came to the conclusion that Robert Frost was the murderer of Tupac.




-Ghost-

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#6 13 years ago
Makaveli96take the fact that he wrote those 2 poems at the age of 9 now thats considered a good poem by a nine year old

I'd be disturbed if a 9 year old wrote those. As poems, they're just...not very good.




Aeroflot

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#7 13 years ago

I've tried to prove to myself that the poems are good, but I've failed.




Admiral Donutz VIP Member

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#8 13 years ago

Not my sort of thing, I guess they would be classified as "avarage" or "below avarage" for anybody of that age in school. :p




PropheticKarma

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#9 13 years ago

The concrete rose is interesting, but in all it lacks emotion for me.




DEADEYE

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#10 13 years ago

yere keep at it Schooling and studying reading,can shape your futer and give you a wealth of Knowledge. Give it your best shot you only get 1 shot at it ;)




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