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Sinister Øne

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#1 13 years ago

I have an english SAC(I think u call them practice exams) tommorrow and I have to do a book review on any book I want... So I chose Prelude to Foundation from the famous Isaac Asimov Foundation series. :bows: I was wondering if anyone would like to give there opinion on what I wrote... Criticism and Complements all welcome! pleased.gif BTW its a short read shouldnt take up to much of your time... 800 words :D




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#2 13 years ago

I don't have Word, and I don't feel like futzing with Wordperfect to get it to open that... Post it as txt or rtf and I'll review it if you want. Book reports though... what level English are you in? :| I don't think I've done a book report since I was in grade school.




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#3 13 years ago

Very well written I should say. I am fascinated by the concept behind the storyline (of Psychohistory and it's potential). All that it needs is a little rewording and a bit of grammar correction and you should be set. :faq:




Sinister Øne

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#4 13 years ago

Kewl, thnx Majic... would u care to point out the sections where I need some serious correction? Only if u have time though! Also I do not wish to post it as a TXT because I can not put protection on it!