Grandpa's Storytime: (Your name here) and the Beast 46 replies

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DavetheFo

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#41 15 years ago

My poor face.

Im lovin being called Sir Dave though. Hmmn, wheres that name change thread?

Keep the story up. Great Work!




GrantHalfner

The old soldier

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#42 15 years ago

Thanks for the compliments. And I in no way intend to rip off the 'Chronicles of GF' wherever they may be.

I'll make the dialouge all 'newed up' so it fits in with modern times.

Sir Dave rode until he came into a cow pasture. He could retain conscience no longer. He toppled off his steed and did not move.

In the morning, he finally awoke, to find himself staring into the eyes of a semi-pretty peasent girl named Harij, who the townspeople all thought was slightly off the rocker.

"Who are you?" She said

"My... name... is... Dave." he said cautiously. "I am from Fo".

"Fo? That is that dumb castle everyone makes fun of! Why are you here?"

"I wanted to save my girlfriend, but a monster beat the crap out of me."

"That bites."

"Yep."

"Come on inside. My brother, Oootis, lives here. Our town hitch-hiker may be able to help you."

"Oootis? What the Hell kind of a name is that?"

"Dunno. Dad was a Swede, and Mum's from India. Granddad's a Russkie. So they gave him a wierd name."

They went inside. Oootis was washing himself off from all the crap he shovelled that day.

He said, "Hello, Harij. And who's the guy in the bad suit?"

"That's Dave."

"Sir Dave," Dave corrected her.

"Whatever"

Long story short, Harij sent Oootis to get the town hitch-hiker to see what he knew about monster claw slashes. It was an hour before they returned.

"I found him!" Oootis came in saying. "He was wrestling hobos Southside."

The hitch-hiker moved to a shadowy corner and leaned against the wall.

"What's his name?" Sir Dave asked.

"We don't know" Harij said.

"He's an interloper."

In the next episode: The bum, Sir Dave, and Oootis embark on a quest, while the King and Queen send out their metally slow soldiers to kill everything in the forest




Col Jimmy Emeric

Led Zeppelin pwns all

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#43 15 years ago

and yet another great story by GrantHalfner




Sh0wdowN

Skeptic Extraordinaire.

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#44 15 years ago

I'm always too late for stories :(




oooits

The Internet ends at GF

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#45 15 years ago

Im loving it :naughty: Keeps getting better and better.




qotsa

Proceeds the Weedian

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#46 15 years ago

Very nice indeed :)




DavetheFo

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#47 15 years ago

Excellent work!

I think Im gonna have to save this all to my comp - partially because im the hero.

Im loving it though. Its awesome, Cant wait for the next part.