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Anson992

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#1 11 years ago

Well, you how now stepped out of the life of the ordinary and into the relm of extraordinary events. Naw, just kidding. This is what you are here for and what I am here for.

I am here to show you my works of art, or in other words poetry. You are here to give me your judgement on it, say whatever you want as long as it involves my poetry. I might let some of you other poetic members post some poetry if you ask my permission first. Thank you, and here is the first poem I'll show you entitled "Dirty hands."

Dirty Hands I've been deliberating, And steadily demostrating, False realities, and why, the world has been decinigrating. A young soldier, willing to stand up, for whats right, but refusing to man up, I'm doing the wrong, And I'm completely aware of it, Looking, searching, trying, to get things that I'll never get. But I keep on trying, It's like I'm addicted, When I should just stop dwelling, just forget it, My heart is stained, soul detained, But I do the same, just remain, I've stood by and watched, innocent's get slain, You don't know the trouble, You don't know the pain, it's insane........ I'm hurting the people I love, I'm hurtin my friends, Then I don't think, And do it all over again, The lone wolf, alone, no one around, Don't be foolish, don't act astounded, But my hearts been broken, over and over, I've been stepped on, over and over, I'm trying to strive, to stay alive, one the insdie, maybe I should die, No one ever really liked me at all, My dynasty is over, time for my downfall, Death, has stared me in the eyes, You want to cry, but be brave, thrive, I'm on my knees now, still not a man, I've been tainted, I have dirty hands, They cannot be cleaned, Not after the things that I've seen. So I'm asking you a favor, be my life saver, I need to get pass, Make this friendship last, Will I ever be happy? I don't know, but what can you expect, messing with the inevitable. Life is known to change, Be normal or strange, But its painful, and I can't stand it, Never again will I take love for granted. And thats it! But i want to say one thing first, you may have seen this poem before depending on what forums you hang around, but it wasn't under my name. If your thinking this isn'tmy original work just drop by the forum you saw it (which should be the FF forum, one of em anyway) and give the guy a PM, ask him if he's Anakin992 on FileFrontForums and he'll say yes. Its me! I keep different persona's around other forums so people can't judge my opinions on what they've seen in other forums. Thats all, more poetry to come soon!




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#2 11 years ago

oh thats dark lol...anyways I write poetry myself, and form my view damn thats good.


[color=#000000][size=2][b][i]Heralds of the coming doom, Like the cry of the Raven, we are drawn, This oath of war and vengeance, On a blade of exalted iron sworn, With blood anointed swords



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#3 11 years ago

Nice poem. I like it.




Anson992

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#4 11 years ago

Dark? What do you mean dark? And I'd very much like to hear your poetry since you think mine is good. Go ahead and post it if you like. I'll post another one soon. And thank you InfantryDivision! I appreciate it.




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#5 11 years ago

What I ment about dark, was there so good Imagery in there, take this part for example "Death, has stared me in the eyes" I can picture what death would look like, Black, lookin' all mencing and what not. My poety grammer is uh well crappy lol damn TV. anways not as long as your so to speak. Come dressed in white with good intentions I stand before you, Dressed in dirt and mud My clothes are dirty yes, yet is my soul? I come standing before you dressed in love, I come, for you have called me to be with you Here I am dressed in desire I desire to be with you Here I come naked before you To show the scars of hate Here I am on my knees prayerful for forgiveness, Here I am in your arms enveloped by your love, You steal my pain away, were it goes nobody knows, I glad to have found you once again threw all the darkness with in my soul, your face widens with a smile Let me follow you I don't care were, Any place is better then within the cold dark Will you let me go with you? I'll be more then happy to follow in to the light, So here I am dressed in white with good intentions Here I stand, helpless and left for dead.

Yet there you are standing over me,

Breathe the breath of life,

Make me whole once more,

You gave me life once, and you do so once again,

Ra is your name, the life giver You escort me out of this godforsaken land, and it to the light You led me to your home told me to sit,

And eat the food you have laid out before me,

You have broken my fall for me,

You have caught me with your arms,

To pick me up once again,

So breathe the breath of life

So I can see this life once more,

You never hesitated to put yourself in harms way,

Just to shield me form my stupid mistakes

Yet there you are standing before me,

Why? Why do you do this for me?

Is it out of love?

Maybe you are showing me things,

Inside of me that I have never seen before

You destroy my hate inside this frail body

You bring out the good in me,

Ankh! That is what you are Life

Ra is your name

Dwua Ra! You have given me life,

Given me everything!

So I can only repay your love with my own love.

So breathe the breath of life

This last one was poem to Ra if you uh haven't gathered lol...Dwua mean praise/hail


[color=#000000][size=2][b][i]Heralds of the coming doom, Like the cry of the Raven, we are drawn, This oath of war and vengeance, On a blade of exalted iron sworn, With blood anointed swords



Anson992

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#6 11 years ago

That was beautiful! So much emotion, your a great writer I must say...... how long have you been writing, I'm curious. That thing about death, what you said was hilarious, but I didn't literally mean the grim reaper guy, I meant I have been close to death. Never heard tht saying before? But I like your interpretation.

In the mean time, heres another one, much shorter. I just thought of it since my notebook is in my locker, and the other site I posted on i down.

Untitled Who is this? Is this me, Hiding underneath the tree? Scared of what my life may be? Running, fleeing, from the pain, from the joys and from the rain, from my friends who comfort me, without them where would I be? But I have fears, both far and near, of losing those who I hold dear. Will they live another day? Will I listen to what they say? I do not, I only run, from my fate which has begun, like the rising of the sun, its bound to happen to everyone. But I afraid of what it holds, afraid of the way it mystically molds, the life of me and you it does, if changes our view of everyone. So now I rise, to see my fate, to seal my truth for goodness sake. Walk into the life and find the nearest, dearest friends of mine.




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#7 11 years ago

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Anson992

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#8 11 years ago

Why did you post that here? That is complete spam.




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#9 11 years ago

you wouldn't beilve me if I told you lol, 4 months. I have piles of it too, loads of poetry. Sometime a verse of a song will inspire me. Take this line "Breathe the breath of life" it's form Breaking Benjamin, Unknown Soldier. I base the Poetry on my Faith.


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Anson992

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#10 11 years ago

Lol, actually I would believe you. I've only been doing poetry seriously since the beginning of this summer. It doesn't take that much to write well, just a bright mind and a heart full of something, pain, love, whatever. It fuels the want to write on paper, and the rhyming is a bonus!