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stansmith

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#11 14 years ago

Words So much anger all the time...... I relieve the anger in many ways. I beat my fists on walls. I carve letters and designs on my hands with pens and staples. One day a crackhead comes up to me and says "dude, you have serious problems." I looked at the guy, a joint behind his ear, beer bottle in his hand and a knife is his belt, and i said "you aren't one to complain, its not like im smoking weed, drinking and killing people. 2 weeks later i see the same guy, but the bottle, knife and joint is gone, he playing basketball with the local kids. I realized that sometimes, words do help,




stansmith

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#12 14 years ago

So little The kid was messing with me, like always. Instead of doing nothing I whip around and sock the kid full force in the jaw. Everything slows down, I see the blood and teeth flying, the terrified look on face. He probably was hoping that I wouldn't hit him again. Before he fell i grabbed him by the shoulders and threw him to the ground. I knelt down beside him. Again and again I hit him. By the time I had let all my anger and frustration was out he didn't look like the same person at all. His face was a bloody pulp. By that time i had realized what I had done. By beating him to hell i had stooped to his level and accomplished nothing. I picked him up and carried him to the hospital . Later that night, he died of a fractured skull. I was arrested the next day. I realized that if I had done something so little such as just ignoring him or trying to talk to talk to him about it I wouldn't have killed him and I wouldnt be getting the death penalty. It is amazing how something like that could have been changed by something so little.




stansmith

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#13 14 years ago

sorry i havent updated in a while

Loser We are the losers you think, the group with problems. What you dont realize is, most of our problems are cause by people not understanding. You look at us and think "what losers", when in ten years you look back on your life and realize you have nothing to show for it. Wannabe b-ball player, got first round pick out of high school, slipped up a few times and know you living with your parents and you think "now im the loser"




stansmith

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#14 14 years ago

Fall You started out at a desk job, wanted a promotion, so you told a few lies, promised you wouldn't lie anymore , next thing you know you at the top of the company. How did you get there? told lies left and right. Thought you smarter than everyone else. Someone found out and as quickly as yo climbed up you fall back down




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#15 14 years ago

Those are all really good! Nothing I could even come close to doing. :(

I like your avatar as well. :D




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