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NCC1017spock

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THE CHARTER OF UNITED EARTH
The Charter of United Earth is for the people of Earth and their well being, designed for freedom and greater being of Human kind. The fighting nations of Earth will no longer have to fight one another and be free to live with out worry of fear of war. There will no longer be competition for resources, land, or money, and Humans will strive to better them selves of the rest of man kind. This government structure will implement pieces of all existing government types and will be know as Unitedism, and is designed to include all nations of the planet Earth and all planets colonized by Earth, including all planets in the Solar System.

All people that are citizens of United Earth are free to become what ever they chose to be, and will not be held back by laws and global doubt, all citizens will be encouraged to be the best they can at all times. However United Earth will have laws, police, and small military and a newly global space program know as the Space Exploration Agency. The power to choose will be in the hands of the people while the stability of the government and actions will be in the hands of the ruling body of United Earth. Governing body, the structure. Unitedism used a double council system that checks and balances it self by using each other and the people though vote, and election. Order of importance and power.

  • The Supreme Council (2 members per continent)
  • The Planetary Council (2 members per country)
  • Regional Governors (1 per region)
  • Sub Regional Administrators (1 per sub region)
  • Township-Village-City Mayors (1 per city-village-mayors)

The United system works on a switching of people in power every 5 years for all members (not #5). Mayors are elected every 10 years and can be impeached at any time (this goes for all members) Electing new members. 1.The people running have campaigns and 4 per continent and 4 per each territory. 2.Out of the four that the people voted for the current Supreme Council votes on all the members for the new Planetary Council and the Planetary Council will vote on members of Supreme Council. 3.On the fourth year the voting tanks place and on the fifth year the switching of office members occurs. Territories: The territories of United Earth will be composed and formed of the already existing boarders of nations that are in United Earth. Larger countries (that are larger the 1000 miles in any direction) will be split into to sections, smaller or equal to 500 miles in any given direction. This way no one territory has more, or too much more power then smaller territories. How ever the broken apart territories will still keep name of previous nation just adding a north, south, east or west and so on. Each territory will have equal say and representation in the government while lager territories will have more citizens in them and more power (in vote size) on voting matters. This way the lager and smaller territories are balanced and each has an advantage and a disadvantage. The Planetary Council will be composed of 2 members form each territory, and will all have equal power and say as every other member of the Planetary Council. The Supreme Council will be composed of 2 members form each continent, and will have the final say on all matters and each member has the same power as each other Supreme Council member. There will be 12, instead of 14 because Antarctica will be counted as free land and will belong to United Earth as a whole and not a specific territory. Money: United Earth’s people will not have to use money, for it will and should not be the driving force in one’s life to accumulate wealth and power. There is a very simple system to use for this. Here is the example that best shows how this system works.

  • A farmer growing corn runs low on seed because he has already shipped out all of his corn.
  • He goes to the store and gets more for no coast.
  • Now the store is out of corn seeds and goes to get more form the corn seed factory, at no coast.
  • Now the corn factory need more corn for make getting seeds form the farmer at no coast for it does not coast anything for the farmer dose not need money to get more seeds.

This is a way of not using currency that checks and balances it self by everything revolving around everything else. This system will stay for as long as a United Earth exists or a full vote of both Supreme and Planetary council vote on returning to currency. Voting: Steps to voting are as followed.

  • Both and/or one of the two councils come up with a law, or piece of the Charter they want to take away or add to it.
  • The peoples of the territories vote yes or no, and if yes then the following happens, there most be at least 70% of people to vote for in favor of it.
  • 90% of all Planetary council members must vote in favor of act to be passed.
  • 10 out of 12 Supreme Council members must also vote in favor of it, for there are 2 representatives for each continents (not including Antarctica)
  • If this happens then the law will be passed.
  • (back to stage 2) If the people vote no then the law/act that is wanted to be past stops there.

Crime and Law are also important parts of United Earth, without it the order and peace will fall apart. The laws are very simple and are mandatory to follow by all citizens of United Earth. Basic Laws are as followed:

  • Any one living on United Earth soil must be a citizen of United Earth.
  • You must be 18 in order to vote, drink, drive or own property.
  • Capital Punishment or “death sentence” will not be carried out, but instead replaced with life long imprisonment. (120-180) years.
  • Illegal drugs or any kind, usage, possession, or selling of will result in at least 50 years in prison.
  • Any type of Assault or robbery will result in at least 10 years prison.
  • Breaking of any preset law in United Earth Book of Laws will result in a minimum of 10 years added to current sentence.
  • Purchase, possession, usage or intent to sell of Illegal fire arms is a minimum of 20 years.
  • Any military action against the people of United Earth or it self will result in armed confrontation or capture of persons attack United Earth with a minimum of 60 year sentence, growing longer depending on war crimes.

The United Earth Book of Laws will expand on these laws and explain with details and add some more important laws along with. Votes, and changes to the Charter will work though the Planetary and Supreme council, along with the peoples in the territories of United Earth. For adding a law, or piece to the Charter and or removing a law or piece of the charter at least 90% of the planetary council most agree and at least 10 out of the 12 Supreme council members must agree to pass it. Exploration and Colonization When the day comes that space travel is easily done, and the time take to explore space is greatly reduced, this is a fact should be given careful thought. United Earth will not be an Empire, so colonized planets such as the Moon and Mars and other planets that are found. If other life is found to by not “intelligent” then it will be treated fairly with respect, its habit untouched and none of the life found will be removed, but it my be study and observed safely. If Intelligent life is found, if they are far less advanced then Man kind then they are to be left alone and there are not to be interacted with. If they are similar or more advanced level then us you are free to make first contact with them and meet. How ever when meeting no weapons, or sharp objects, anything other then cloths. Slow hand motion and words are to be used, and no changes, or fast walking either. If planets are found to be unoccupied them colonization may begin and delivery of supplies may began and exporting of raw materials. Plants and dead animals native to the planet may also be exported, but they may not be killed by humans, but DNA samples are allowed, if found. Water, air, rock and soil samples my also be exported off the planet back to earth, but most be in contained, air tight containers so no germs, and/or pathogens are brought to earth, this rule goes for all living of once was living. All members when first stepping onto planet not matter what atmosphere is made up of must where EV suits, no exceptions when on first visit. How ever once planet is deemed safe by visiting team, and has been approved by Space Exploration Agency (SEA) then on second visit and all other visits (unless said other wise)




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#2 10 years ago

What is this?




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#3 10 years ago

New version of his thread. I've closed the other.




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#4 10 years ago

thanks Zamamee, and here is its symblo, I like it ( I [COLOR=red]DID NOT[/COLOR] MAKE IT) United_Earth_logo.png




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#5 10 years ago

Also it is still not done but it is about 50% done, and is looking nice. ( Ihave posted the 50% above)




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#6 10 years ago

This is still... Amusing at best.

Money: United Earth’s people will not have to use money, for it will and should not be the driving force in one’s life to accumulate wealth and power. There is a very simple system to use for this. Here is the example that best shows how this system works.
  • A farmer growing corn runs low on seed because he has already shipped out all of his corn.
  • He goes to the store and gets more for no coast.
  • Now the store is out of corn seeds and goes to get more form the corn seed factory, at no coast.
  • Now the corn factory need more corn for make getting seeds form the farmer at no coast for it does not coast anything for the farmer dose not need money to get more seeds.

Your system is still flawed. Such a system leaves no incentive for hard work, and only encourages unauthorized barter. This method only works for some markets and professions, while others will be left stale or unrewarded.

  • The peoples of the territories vote yes or no, and if yes then the following happens, there most be at least 70% of people to vote for in favor of it.
  • 90% of all Planetary council members must vote in favor of act to be passed.

Awfully high numbers, virtually unattainable, take a look at the current standards. They are much lower and it is STILL difficult for some things to get passed as they simply bounce around from one stage to another and back.

  • Any one living on United Earth soil must be a citizen of United Earth.
  • You must be 18 in order to vote, drink, drive or own property.
  • Capital Punishment or “death sentence” will not be carried out, but instead replaced with life long imprisonment. (120-180) years.
  • Illegal drugs or any kind, usage, possession, or selling of will result in at least 50 years in prison.
  • Any type of Assault or robbery will result in at least 10 years prison.
  • Breaking of any preset law in United Earth Book of Laws will result in a minimum of 10 years added to current sentence.
  • Purchase, possession, usage or intent to sell of Illegal fire arms is a minimum of 20 years.
  • Any military action against the people of United Earth or it self will result in armed confrontation or capture of persons attack United Earth with a minimum of 60 year sentence, growing longer depending on war crimes.

Your incarceration times are also awfully high. And inconsequential, Your sentence for possession is five times as high as assault. :rolleyes:

Exploration and Colonization

When the day comes that space travel is easily done, and the time take to explore space is greatly reduced, this is a fact should be given careful thought. United Earth will not be an Empire, so colonized planets such as the Moon and Mars and other planets that are found. If other life is found to by not “intelligent” then it will be treated fairly with respect, its habit untouched and none of the life found will be removed, but it my be study and observed safely. If Intelligent life is found, if they are far less advanced then Man kind then they are to be left alone and there are not to be interacted with. If they are similar or more advanced level then us you are free to make first contact with them and meet. How ever when meeting no weapons, or sharp objects, anything other then cloths. Slow hand motion and words are to be used, and no changes, or fast walking either. If planets are found to be unoccupied them colonization may begin and delivery of supplies may began and exporting of raw materials. Plants and dead animals native to the planet may also be exported, but they may not be killed by humans, but DNA samples are allowed, if found. Water, air, rock and soil samples my also be exported off the planet back to earth, but most be in contained, air tight containers so no germs, and/or pathogens are brought to earth, this rule goes for all living of once was living. All members when first stepping onto planet not matter what atmosphere is made up of must where EV suits, no exceptions when on first visit. How ever once planet is deemed safe by visiting team, and has been approved by Space Exploration Agency (SEA) then on second visit and all other visits (unless said

This whole section could not be more out of place. Not only should matters so delicate not be determined by a vague charter, they shouldn't be determined in a charter in the first place. That section sounds more like a "tourist's guide to mars" than one of the most important documents a government has.

On another note, you still have to fix your typos. And the moon is not a planet. It's a moon. :]




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#7 10 years ago

thanks for you help, I give or take within a week I'll have all the bugs worked out of this. (please every one please keep giving imput so I can make changes) and if there is something you THINK should be added please say so.




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#8 10 years ago

Basic Laws are as followed:

  • Any one living on United Earth soil must be a citizen of United Earth.
  • You must be 18 in order to vote, drink, drive or own property.
  • Capital Punishment or “death sentence” will not be carried out, but instead replaced with life long imprisonment. (120-180) years.
  • Illegal drugs or any kind, usage, possession, or selling of will result in at least 50 years in prison.
  • Any type of Assault or robbery will result in at least 10 years prison.
  • Breaking of any preset law in United Earth Book of Laws will result in a minimum of 10 years added to current sentence.
  • Purchase, possession, usage or intent to sell of Illegal fire arms is a minimum of 50 years.
  • Any military action against the people of United Earth or it self will result in armed confrontation or capture of persons attack United Earth with a minimum of 60 year sentence, growing longer depending on war crimes.

that better ?




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#9 10 years ago

Why is it that possession of drugs has more time in prison then possession of illegal firearms?




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#10 10 years ago

check the updated laws I fixed it