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MrFancypants Forum Administrator

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#31 16 years ago

I don't force you to write one, do I? If you want to make a fuckpoets-thread do so in the melee. Dako, you're not out yet. But by now it should be clear for all the others what is meant with "your own creatiion", right? :)




WiseBobo

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#32 16 years ago
A Soldier's Plight By: Brenden Azevedo

I marched to the left, I marched to the right, I marched until there was nothing left in sight; I slung my rifle to the left, I slung it to the right, I eventually gave up and just sighted the sight; I looked around with nothing to be found, I searched far, I searched right, for it was the middle of the night; I kept looking and looking for something to shoot; too bad for me there was only an unarmed gook; Knowing that I would be court marshalled for ending a life, there I went, straight into the night.

************************************************************************ Absolutely no offense towards asians; Gooks are simply people who pretend to be a civilian when you look at them, and when you turn your back, brandish an AK-47.




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#33 16 years ago

I need the points I realy do, I don't want to thief and sue, I'll buy a colord name, Or something priced the same.




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#34 16 years ago

Ok, time's up. I liked this one most:

Lions of the eldest shore, Hoping not to go to war, Not on earth our love to find, Love of country not of mind, Misdemeanours may still show, Yet how can we judge our brothers so? For in the battle this we know, One is all and all will know, Will it through to carry the day, Remember our brothers find a better way. -Ged

Second place, also for all the effort he put into this takes Da-Ko

Lone Wolf He travels across the lonely land, He runs across the pits of sand, Howling at the moon at night, Howling at the never ending fight, Watching the burning sun arise, Watching the mountains of infinite size, Climbing in and out of the cold, To survive is the only goal. -Da-Ko

Third place is for n0e, whose poem can be found in the "for dog lovers" thread, which might have been deleted by now :) A pitty that this valuable piece of literature will be lost for coming generations ;)

I rated the fisrt place with 250 points, the second with 100 and the third with a virtual brownie-cookie).




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#35 16 years ago

Hi its scorpy waddya know down here it never seems to snow right now i should be in bed so i can use a pencil with led.




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#36 16 years ago

my best poem ever.

Death During the night You see the light Eyes shine; before me and before you Beneath the sand, the blazing land You meet Death, black hood on his head Death shows respect he takes thy hand Death smiles he swaths for miles Your in his sight,He aims exact Deep inside no lucky strike One scythe alone Your main bone is gone And your soul is strong no more Pure and clean no longer mean Buried under deep within The eternal castle of your dream The realm of decay is like a huge bay Your time capsule is a tomb That will keep your bones so warm Just in time all we will die No fear, no cry, Death knows your line



Da-Ko

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#37 16 years ago

Thank you fancy pants.