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Da-Ko

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#1 14 years ago

These are just a few poems that I wrote. What do you think of them? Are they any good? Let me know what you think about this post:D . :thumbsup: Lone Wolf

He travels across the lonely land,

He runs across the pits of sand,

Howling at the moon at night,

Howling at the never ending fight,

Watching the burning sun arise,

Watching the mountains of infinite size,

Climbing in and out of the cold,

To survive is the only goal.

Broken Heart

I have no allies I have no friends,

Only a broken heart that will not mend,

I look back at my life in the past,

When things didn’t move so fast,

To fight this world alone is my legacy,

To die in this world alone is my destiny.

Which Way

Do I go Left,

Do I go right,

Either way I can’t see what’s in sight,

Do I take the road that’s high,

Do I take the road that’s low,

Either way the journey is slow,

Do I run,

Do I stay,

Either way I don’t know what to say.

Do I stay silent,

Do I ask,

Either way you can’t see through my mask.




Admiral Donutz VIP Member

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#2 14 years ago

They are pretty goodm although they should have to rhyme. Poems don't have to, but they are nice though! they hold dome truth (although many variants on your poems are already outthere.




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#3 14 years ago

Nice poems Da-Ko. Whenever i see a poetry thread i always like to post my favorite poem: Fire and Ice Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice. From what i've tasted of desire I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that destruction ice Is also great And would suffice. -Robert Frost




evildude

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#4 14 years ago
V0rtexNice poems Da-Ko. Whenever i see a poetry thread i always like to post my favorite poem: Fire and Ice Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice. From what i've tasted of desire I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that destruction ice Is also great And would suffice. -Robert Frost

?????// is there a meanying to that poem ???????? i don't get it




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#5 14 years ago

Of course there's a meaning. The poet is saying that the world will end in either fire (nuclear war) or ice (hatred, greed). He goes on to say that he thinks fire will end the world, like in a nuclear war because so many countries posses them and wars are so common. Then the poet says that he knows enough of hate to understand that greed and hatred (terrorists) is also strong and equally capable of destroying the world.