Jedi Academy movie- Rise of the sith empire -1 reply

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#1 10 years ago

So, this a movie i made using Jedi Academy and the mod called knights of the force. I am not sure if this is the right sub-forum to post it so please move it if another forum fits better. The movie: The story is set between episode 3 and 4 and the story has a twist of mine wich you will see during the movie. For example Darth Maul is not dead and so on:) More info is provided during the movie by Darth Sidious.

Remember to watch in HIGH QUALITY! Leave me a note and please tell if you like it and i might make another

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#2 10 years ago

-Jedi is capitalized -Force is capitalized -Sith is capitalized -"jedi's" is not plural, it's posessive -Your lack of punctuation is disturbing -Your lack of choreography is also disturbing

Your video would benefit strongly from some additional thought and some real direction. Vader behaves unnaturally; in that armor he wouldn't be doing rolls like you had him doing, and I'm sure he's a good enough swordsman not to be randomly swinging at nothing. For future videos you may want to consider taking a little extra time and directing it better.