A trafic story of Rosh Penin, not like the other kinds U see! -1 reply

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Tulak Hord

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#1 11 years ago

Well, here goes for y'all who want a story about Rosh.

It was 3:00 AM Rosh Pennin could not sleep. He was having nightmares. Terrible ones. He sat up, his bed creaking. He listened intently, as the rain pelted against the window. Pitter Pattering. He grabbed his glass of blue milk and took a nice long drink. It was warm, but refreshing. His mouth was so dry, it was life comming down his throat. He decided to get up. A nice morning stroll would clear his mind. He got dressed and went outside (forgetting the umbrella) The cold of the night (kinda morning) nipping at his brow. As the rain pelted against him, he sang, in a powerful voice:

"It's the same routine every day! I have nightmares, I get up, listen to the scolding of Kyle and Jaden, listen as my peers chukcle and snicker. I just wanted a normal life! Not to be treated like a trash heap. I'm a jedi too. Maybe not great, but I am. I'm just different. Different. Different from the rest. I didn't choose to be this way! Maybe I was better as a kid leading a normal life on Yarelda. Why must it be this way? Every night a go to bed, the jeers and shouts lingering in my head! WHY? WHY MUST IT BE THIS WAY?"

Rosh looked up into the night/morning sky, as the little rain droplets blurred his vision. Rosh then whispered:

"I love you Mom" and headed inside.

By the time he got back, the smell of breakfast filled his nostrils. Bacon, eggs, pancakes, hash borons, toast, cereal, you name it. It was all being whipped up by a very attractive lady named Jan. He went ahead and got in line, and he was the first, amazing! Then some of the other jedi came along and pushed Rosh out of their way, jeering an spiiting at him. Rosh took this in silently, although a wildfire of anger burned inside him. He went up to Jan, and ordered. He noticed the twinkle in her blue eyes. So blue, they could have been water. Rosh took his try and sat down at an empty table, preparing himself for hi meal. The same group of jedi appeared, and kicked him to the floor, throwing his try and all the food on it his head. His chin slammed into the metal surface, and blood dripped from his lip. Oh boy, another happy morning. He left the cafeteria without eating. Not after what just happened to him. He made for training with Luke when several jedi blocked his path.

Jedi1: (rapping) hold it right there Pennin

The jedi punched Rosh right on the mouth, sending him flying across the hall. His head made contact with the wall and took of a couple large stones.

Jedi2: (taunt singing) oohh, looks like someone had an accident. I going to tell master Luke.

Rosh: (singing in a desperate voice) No.....

Rosh grabs a knife from his belt and rushes the students.

Jedi: Ohh, are you going to hurt us with your small knife?

Blood came from his lip and head, as he was silent.

Jedi: Ohh, little Roshy is hurt!

Jedi2: Ohh, maybe I should kiss his little bu bu.

Jedi1 came up to Rosh, and smacked him on the fce a couple of times, and then threw him to the floor. Again, his chin slammed into the rock, which was cold and hard. Jedi2 came over and offered a hand. Rosh grabbed his hand, just as Jedi2 spit in his face. Jedi1 grabbed Rosh by the collar and slammed him through one of the doors, which broke, and Rosh fell into the courtyard

Jedi!: Have a nice day Pennin.

Blood covering his face, Rosh limped to a bench, and layed down. The cold hard stone was the best thing that could calm his mind. He fell asleep, his only escape from the day's torments.

Rosh's Nightmare

A woman was going to be killed. A woman Rosh knew all too well. Kathy Pennin, the only one who had ever loved him. It was high noon. The sun beat on the backs of bystandes. Guards in black leather patrolled, with whips and swords. A lady that looked like she had been form He double toothpicks and back was thrown out onto the deck of a tower. One of the guards followed.

Guard: Shall we whip her?

The crowd screamed to kill the swine, kill the traiter, kill the pig, etc. but give her a severe beating! A man came out of a door, shirtless, muscles buldging, olnu held together by leather straps. He pulled out a large whip, and ripped off the back of Kathy's shirt. He raised thw whip and did what he does best. Every SPLAT, rvery scream, every cheer sounded like a thounderbolt to two year old Rosh Pennin. He was alone. His dad left him to his wife, but she was about to be killed. Rosh watched with a pain so deep in his heart as this happened. Once this finished, she was slammed around, and then, a man wearing all black lead her to the gallows. The whole crowd was silent. The exacutioner tied a rope around Kathy's neck, the rope burning her skin. He pulled the lever that opened the hatch beneath her and watched. There, the final moments of Kathy's life. She hung there, for about 10 seconds, until she heard a SNAP! andd her vision faded. Kathy Pennin was just killed.

Rosh woke up with a start, looking around. It was about 12:00 He felt the tried and crusted blood on his face. He went to a wooden house, just outside the academy grounds, and dug up a whaki-zashi. A vey powerful sword. He went back to the academy to get lunch. The same usual thing happened. But this time, he got up, and unseathed his whaki-zashi. He grabbed a jedi and sliced his head off. The other jedi noticed and surrounded him. creaming things like, You pig, I'll kil YOU!. In his rage and anger, he struck them all down. As the last one fell to the floor, he said in a brave voice

"Only the fittest survive in this world. If you're strong you live, if you're weak, you die!"

Master Luke came down just as this happened, and confronted Rosh.

Luke: Rosh, I can't let you do this

Rosh: If you're smart, you will

They fought.

Rosh: You didn't protect me. you could've, but you didn't! Why?

Luke: What happened Rosh?

Rosh: You didn't protect me

Luke: ROSH! Luke struck him a blow to the shoulder, and carried him into the hangar. Luke had R2D2 hook rosh's neck up on a rope, and prepared to drop a trap door, while he was 10ft above the ground.

Luke: I'm sorry Rosh

Rosh: Luke, please.....

Luke: I'm sorry.

Rosh: Please don't

Luke: I have to.

Luke turns and walks away, just before R2 lets down the door.

Rosh: LUKE!

The trapdoor opened, and osh hung there. In his final moment's he saw has mom, standing there

Rosh: Mom.

Crack. His neck broke, and Rosh Pennin was no more.

The End

(sorry if some of you are crying)

Tulak Hord

Will Rosh ever be the same to you again?




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#2 11 years ago

Crying? :lol:

It was nice, and I seem to have the same writing style as you when I right a story. (I'm writing one now, actually. Medieval based...)

I liked it, but the end where Rosh and Luke fight was a bit...odd. Though Rosh will still be the same to me, I loved the story. Good job.




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#3 11 years ago

Well, Luke had to stop Rosh from killing any more innocents...

Oh yah, it's not trafic, it's tragic!




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#4 11 years ago

Creative...though didn't Jan have brown eyes? :p Definitely a different spin on Rosh, though I can't say I like him playing the role of tragic hero. He's more fun to pick on than to sympathize with.




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#5 11 years ago

I guess so. (not reffereing to Rapp's post, we posted at the same time)

I lol'd at the:

As the last one fell to the floor, he said in a brave voice

"Only the fittest survive in this world. If you're strong you live, if you're weak, you die!" So...err, funny?

I feel like writing up a long post, telling what I thought about it, but I have got no time (yet). So, for now, I'll just say that I liked it.




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#6 11 years ago

Yeah, she did,(Jan and brown eyes) but still, blue sounds better when you see a twinkle there!

True, we all love to pik on him, but sometimes, he can get very sad.

Funny...I wasn't trying to be. The phrase was taken from what Makoto Shishio said to Sojiro Seta in Kenshin Episode 55: Tragedy of a Stormy Night. Sojiro believed in this phrase for a long time. Plus, the part about Rosh being angry with Luke also was from Kenshin. Sojiro was mad at Kenshin because Kenshin didn't do aything to help (do ya think if he knew what happened that he would've? SURE!) Same with Luke and Rosh. Luke knew all about this, and didn't do nuttin' at all. Sojiro was only eight when he killed his family, mebbe eighteen when he fought Kenshin.

Kinda the smae, kinda the different. Don't matter.

Heh, I would'nt mind a long post from you Johnpp!




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#7 11 years ago

True, nothin' wrong with taking some artistic liberties. 'Sides, we shouldn't be such bullies on a helpless little game character, right?=p




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#8 11 years ago

Yer right there man! I mean, Rosh still has feelings, no matter how much he hides em or how wimpy he is. This is just a lifelike take on how he feels about all this.

And besides, a life-like idea anyways, Luke coulda sliced Rosh's Wakizashi right in half, but he is way more poweful than that.

As for hanging Rosh, that's just to make you feel worse. Sure, Luke wouldn't do that, but hey, would ya rather see Rosh live after what he did?




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#9 11 years ago

Story's a little hard to read with the plethora of spelling and grammatical errors. You might want to proofread next time if you're planning on posting your work.

The whole story seemed really random.




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#10 11 years ago

Well, the spelling and grammer, UR right. I rly shoulda fixed em.

As for being random, I don't understand...