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#1 13 years ago

My Novel needs your help. New styles of weapons, cloths and bad guys...I want your Ideas!

Periodicly I'll post pictures of the characters from my handy dandy cell phone. and the Enigma class starship featured in the story.

Galo Saldivia: Section 31's finest Admiral Tatyanna Vanya: Head of Star Fleet Intel Ahnis Re'al: Intelligence dealer and vigilanty against 31 Lt.Cmd Saquist: Head of Star Fleet Security Dursk son of Chajox: Klingon Ambasador to Romulus Carlos Garza: Brother of Galo Saldiva "Ace Pilot" Ralos Veno: Romulan royalty

Here we go... SECTION 31

Setting: Memory Alpha Information Archive

Problem: Stranded Jem' Hadar in the Alpha Quadrant have been granted assylum in the Federation. Federation law prevents geneticly altered persons from gaining "prestige".

The Federation council has gathered here to discuss Gentic ban reform. Currently the 5 generations are banned upon one person illegally altering their genetic structure...No pursuit of Star Fleet Service No field involving genetics No public office No athletic compettion

Section 31's mission: Too much has come to the light about The Agency. S-31 will use this event to Discredit those having knowledge of Section 31 and erase all evidence of their existance.

Galo Saldiva working along side Section 31's right-hand organization The Orion Syndicate will access the Federations Alpha Net, transfer relay control to the Section 31's acquired vessel where they will erase all relevant material. This will update almost 95% of all Fed systems with inaccurate data.

Something goes wrong..(of course) The Orion Syndicate betrays Section 31. Rogue Jem'Hadar attack the Facility holding all in attendance hostage. They are lead by Raga (TNG "HUNTED" war veteran strategist and Galo Saldiva appears to have switched sides, captured by Star Fleet security. It is a calculated attack and it's only just begun. Managing to Lure 7 Federation starships close to the facility he seizes them, Using prefix codes obtained throught the Alpha Net to order the ships to lower their shields and beaming their crews into space. Taking the Defaint class U.S.S. Diablo as his flagship Roga's Rogues leave the remaing ships diabled and flees with his captures and Section 31's stealth vessel, still connected to the Alpha Net.

Galo does manages to dispense a Code called Enigma into the Alpha net encripting the Federations entire system. Unfortunantly every computer data base accessing the net is encoded aswell. The starship and its code must be found and Raga's Rogues stopped before someone take's advantage of Star Fleets inability to communicate in real time.




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#2 13 years ago

Wow, that's a real great story line! One weapon that I'd to see is the Displaced Firing TR-117 from that DS9 episode. It wouldn't hurt if you threw in Transphasic Torps and Ablative Armor somewhere on a starship either ;)




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#3 13 years ago

Need more Blurb... what's is the TR-117 and if ya got pictures post them here.

It's my hope that this book will be published or picked up by the Bridge Commander community.




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#4 13 years ago

I'm sure that the BC Community would pick it up. The TR-117 was in the DS9 Season 7 Episode "Field of Fire". For details and pics, go to DITL.org's weapons section. It'll give ya pics, and a full description of it.




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#5 13 years ago

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#6 13 years ago

THE FISRT IS STAR FLEET UNIFORM FOR star fleet Intel The second is Admiral Tatyanna Vanya.




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#7 13 years ago

Wow, did you draw those? They're REALLY good.




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#8 13 years ago

Yes, but these are only rough sketches.

Tatyanna is 45 years old and recently became Admiral, then appointed Head over Star Fleet Intel.

The Uniform she'll wear will be (top) glossy black (bottom) flat black and her collar, rank and other decor will be Gold. Command: Gold Sciences: Silver (as in picture) Security: Bronze




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#9 13 years ago

Oh my god! Those are rough sketches?!?! I'm afraid to see what you're final drawings will look like then! My eyes will probably fall out! IMO, I think that Intel should be given their own color. Command has Red, Medical has Green, Tactical has Yellow, so why not give them an entirely new color?




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#10 13 years ago

They are and its black. I've designed the current uniform so that in the field all the color and connection to starfleet may be removed. The uniform will not ever be seen out side Star Fleet's Intell structures. Otherwise their opperation may be compromised.

Tomorrow I hope to have pictures of the two new warbirds in place sinces I've finished them on AutoCAD. The biggest is to the Predator class or D'dessedix class The small one will be the Romulan Gun Ship War Glide.