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Almighty_gir

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#11 13 years ago

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working on texturing.... im so lazy haha




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#12 13 years ago

That's one ugly chick..

Me Ook. Ook like pie.




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#13 13 years ago

Since Red can't seem to give constructive criticism, I'll be a little more detailed now than I was before.

First of all, the way her chin is textured makes her look like she has a severe underbite. Her eyebrow area is way too defined - she's looking kind of like an orc, actually, in that respect - her eyes look almost sunken into her skull. Her mouth also almost seems too narrow, though it's hard to tell from that angle.

I must say the nose does look very good, though. You're getting better at softening up the features... except that brow. My goodness... :p I do suppose that her lack of eyebrows may be partially responsible for it looking so odd, though.




Almighty_gir

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#14 13 years ago

hahaha, thanks iny =]

at least i know im making progress, learning to use softer painting for females, and harder for males =]

ill add some eyebrows later and see about softening up everything else.

also, wtf is an underbite?




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#15 13 years ago

An underbite is when your lower jaw sticks out farther than your upper jaw. Basically what I was trying to say is her lower jaw looks protruded... or something. I can't exactly put my finger on it, but maybe you can see what I see... mebbe.




Almighty_gir

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#16 13 years ago

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#17 13 years ago

200% better :)




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#18 13 years ago

actually, its 201% better ;)




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