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Ventus

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#1 7 years ago

I've been working on a project that remains low profile :) and I need some honest opinions on my work. I've put together a human male in the picture below. It was done in ms paint before anyone points that out, I have done so as a means of practice before I purchase any better software. Im also aware of some flawed areas, (imo mostly the feet, where I just got lazy.) I made this as a means of concept art, what do you think? Also, I would appreciate it if no one takes my work, thanks! =p

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Hirman

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#2 7 years ago

Looks close to proportions. the arms may need to be a bit longer and the head bigger, and add more detail as this looks unfinished and done in hurry.




Ventus

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#3 7 years ago

Thanks hirman. I've redone the arms probably 4 times. The arm on the right is supposed to be armor plated. But I can definatly see a lack of definition there of. I thought the head was somewhat small too. I feel like the stomach needs something, but I'm not sure where it went wrong.




Almighty_who?

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#4 7 years ago

i uh... wow... just wow.

honestly? draw on paper and scan it in.




Hirman

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#5 7 years ago

Almighty_who?;5433331i uh... wow... just wow.

honestly? draw on paper and scan it in.

hmm....possible he may not have a scanner :p




Almighty_who?

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#6 7 years ago

take pictures, using a phone if necessary. anything is better than that.




Ventus

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#7 7 years ago

That bad huh?




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#8 7 years ago

Looks pretty good man, though i think the head needs to be a bit larger. Also, if you could give us a colored version that would be be good as we could get a better overall idea of how the skin would look.




Ventus

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#9 7 years ago

Thanks Nozy, like almighty said tho, I think I should consider improving some more before I post more content. I've made plenty of concepts aside from this one and I really enjoyed them. As far as adding color, ik theres far more to it than using bucket fill. And I get the general idea, but it could be sometime before I'm decent at it. Not so sure I should try adding color on ms paint anyway.