Hello.
I am modeler beginning
I wanting you showing my creation
sword n°1: http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/844/gunbladeee6.png
sword n°2: http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8405/hyperionpl7.png
flute n°1: http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7996/flute2gi5.jpg
sword n°3: http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/1262/banalepeqs3.png
and this is sora ultima keyblade no finish: http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6948/ultimakeybladenq1.jpg
SHURIKEN CATAPULT! WOOOO! Even if it does look like the sides are totaly flat.
It does look rather good. I just have my doubts, you see there's already models out for what you've done. And I hate to say it but they look almost exactly identical. Not saying you're stealing them, but I'd go for making something that's not already out. They're good none the less.
http://jediknight2.filefront.com/screenshots/File/55240/4
His gunblade looks similar, but it's not exactly the same. Not sure what that arrow thing is on the tip of the Hyperion, though.
Hmmm...two of those have already been done, a flute is an interesting touch, not sure about the third sword.....and VERY good start on the Ultima Weapon Keyblade, and I wish you luck on that, as it has to be the most complex weapon in Kingdom Hearts.
Quite good for a first try. The Hyperion and the knife look a little strange, though. The knife especially could do with more work, the blade sharpened and the hand guard, handle and pommel made to look appropriate. The keyblade isn't all that difficult. I suggest you texture the decorations on the blade and hand guard and either alpha map or model those that extend beyond the aforementioned objects.
did u use the line tool to make most of those by any chance?
I am modeler beginning !!