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Alpha 77

The Dark Lord Of The Sith-Reva

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#1 10 years ago

Hi im gonna create a mod called the Return Of Revan.I have 4 team mebers all good modelers and skiners.Im looking for a team. Know about the story it based on one jedi that returns the sith and Become's Lord Revan The Dark Lord of the Sith. Story:One Day a Jedi Master Called Master Jesus found a kid he was in trouble becuse some Storm Troopers thugs attacked the kid becuse he stoled from them.The Jedi Master protected the kid with his lightsaber from the blasters Master Jesus killed the storm troopers.Then he talked to the kid but the master sensed that he was strong in the force and smarter then Anakin Skywalker.Jesus asked the kid what is his name then the kid said that his name was Rex Star.Jesus said on his mind that his grand grandfather was Darth Revan.And then Jesus asked the kid do you wanna become a jedi.The kid said yes.Then they go to the academy. (Ten years later)Rex Star Became a jedi knight but he was offen angry his master told him that anger lead's to the dark side.Rex Star was a leader when he acted the others followed.He had four freends Atton,Magi,Carth and Mira.Rex was in love with Magi.One day Magi was sent on a mission to invastigate but she never came back.Rex was sent to find her.He Found her but as a sith.Rex started fighting with her.But she escaped. After that you will meat you're freends and they say that they will swear loality to you and whatever you do they will folllow. Rex was sent to many planets (there will be much missions on the planets the planets will be Dantooine,Tantooine,Mustafar,Duxn,Korriban there you will become Darth Revan or you can become a Jedi Master if you want to become Darth Revan you will join her. If you want to become a Jedi Master you will let her escape and later in the game you will merry her).There You will fight sith meet many people have many missions. Now we will start to korriban there you will fight sith as evry planet but you will have choises i already said what they will be if you are a Jedi Master Revan she will escape and later you will merry there will be a war Atton and the others will join you to fight evil You will fight in the wars.Then You will fight with Sith Lords they are Darth Entreras,Darth Talot,Darth Hiret,Darth Jerret and they you will destroy the sith when you kill The Sith Lords and merry Magi.But if you are a Sith Lord you will return the sith and destroy the jedi you're freends will follow you.You will fight with The Jedi Master they are Master Kaneri,Master Jesus,Master Rearr,Master Strickter,Master Zorkazher. Charecters:Revan-Rex,Atton,Magi,Jesus,Sith Lords,Jedi Masters,Mira and Carth. Modelars skiners and etc:Revan-me.The Beast,Kotorfen,Nihilus,Sion and crazy gizka>>>>>>>>>>>>we are still looking for more team meabers. Mods:The Return Of Revan JK3 and the other one we are working on is for kotor 2 The Search for Revan primery charectar Exile. Later when we finish The Return of revan we will do The Search for Revan but first this mod we will be looking modelers and skiniers ant etc. for this mod i reapeat.Later for the other mod !!!!! Thank you for you're time have a nice day:cool:!!!




Averus_Retruthan

...Or has it just begun?

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#2 10 years ago

Uh huh o_O well..enjoy your total "conservation" mod. I'm sure many trees will support this.




Chiron

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#3 10 years ago

Meh, do what you can with it. But i prefer the whole, Revan died in the unknown regions more. Make a mod about the Exile following after him and others coming as well.




katanamaru

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#4 10 years ago

That story... wow. I hope you're joking, but I'm not quite sure. You may want to go back and make it a lot less "Mary Sue." Right now it sounds like really bad fanfiction. "Smarter than Anakin?" I didn't think Anakin was dumb. And how would the master know Anakin's intelligence level. Like I said, lots of reworking and editing with the story alone.




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#5 10 years ago

I say leave Reven out of the story.




Alpha 77

The Dark Lord Of The Sith-Reva

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#6 10 years ago

Then how about the Exile




iZero

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#7 10 years ago
Alpha 77;4814596 Story:One Day a Jedi Master Called Master Jesus found a kid he was in trouble becuse some Storm Troopers thugs attacked the kid becuse he stoled from them.

1: Stoled is not a word.

2. Did Jedi Master Jesus have long flowing hair and a large beard?

Now do you see why this story needs tweaking?




~*Seto*~

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#8 10 years ago

I'd just like to actually point out that the word you are looking for is "conversion," not "conservation" :rolleyes:.




katanamaru

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#9 10 years ago
Alpha 77;4814891Then how about the Exile

No. Leave out character names that are already used in the Star Wars universe. If the character became a sith lord, why would he go by the same name of a sith lord from the past? If you want to use the Revan player model then go ahead, but make a new name. Mainly rewrite your story. It is bad fanfiction right now. From plot to characters, everything is bad right now. Stormtrooper thugs. Jedi Master Jesus. "Marry" a sith lord. "Great" grandfather was Darth Revan. Friends swearing loyalty. These are just some of the things that need to be removed/revised before anybody will take you mod seriously.




Alpha 77

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#10 10 years ago

How about Revan's son Becuse you know what revan does with bastila.I now think about a new story how about this. Story:(Five years later after Revan's disappearance)After five years Revan returned to the galaxy but all of the sith were destroyed the only one remeing was Bastila.When Revan returned he's first destenation was Korriban.Revan went to Korriban but it was under Republic control.Revan killed the Republic soldiers and entered the Sith Academy.It was filled with jedi masters.Revan destoyed evry jedi master in there.He searched for Bastila.Revan found her in one Force Cage.She was beat up realy good.Revan opend the force cage. Revan healed her wound's and then they kissed.Bastila asked Revan why he did he return so late.Revan said becuse he was captured by The True Sith.And he manged to run away.Revan said to bastila it's time to return the Sith.Revan went to Onderon and searched for an army he found many injured Onderonions soldiers. He healed them and said now i saved you soldier now you're life's are mine.Later Revan said to the soldier to find more troopers to join Revan.Revan went to Dantoine with Bastila but there was a war there between dark jedi and jedi.Revan and Bastila killed the jedi.And the Dark Jedi joined Revan.The Sith awakend again. Revan and his trooper that were the old sith troopers from kotor 1 armor went to Nar Shadda but it was a Republic Planet there was a war betwenn you're troopers and dark jedi vs Republic Troopers and jedi.Revan is suppousto Kill The Jedi Master Called Jesus. Other Missions on other planets (Mannan-Jedi Master Rearr-Kashykk Jedi Master Vaneti-Jedi Master Gerrah-Corusant War Between you're aramy and The republic and jedi). Charecters:Revan,Commader Art,Bastila and Commander Grcee. New Story Created by new team meber gEsHa !!!