The Return Of Revan (Total Conservation) -1 reply

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Mikouen VIP Member

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#11 10 years ago

Still sounds like you copy-pasted a slashfic and changed all the names around.


I don't know how, and I don't know why, but this is totally Sheep's fault.



Chiron

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#12 10 years ago

eehmm.. you could just make a story of one of the Jedi who went to war with Revan, and stuff after the war. But leave revan out for the most part.




Raiden47

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#13 10 years ago
Mikouen;4815771Still sounds like you copy-pasted a slashfic and changed all the names around.

you´ve got it !

Personly i think it´s boring and not original ,maybe you guys should read the Kotor Comics and remake a part of the original story ...




DrAshgod

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#14 10 years ago

Or go to the Lucasforums site and look in the kotor section for the "Coruscant..." board. There are some awesome fan fictions there.




Revan564

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#15 10 years ago

But I never left :lookaround:, Just kidding, have some :beer:




Kalek_Dakar

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#16 10 years ago
Averus_Retruthan;4814663Uh huh o_O well..enjoy your total "conservation" mod. I'm sure many trees will support this.

Erm. That ^




katanamaru

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#17 10 years ago

You mention Revan's son, but your stroy follows Revan and Bastilla. You also seem to be hung up on this notion that there has to be love/sex in your story. The part about Jedi beating up Bastilla is bad and wrong, or badong. What do you mean 'captured by the true Sith and running away.' Revan just killed every Jedi master on Korriban but he couldn't handle the Sith lords? I didn't think it bared repeating but, don't use names like Jedi master Jesus. You will offend some players, and others will think it is just tacky or immature. How about we find out what you really want to do? You really want Revan to be the character it seems. How about not being the actual person Revan but along the way finding some sith robes that look like his. What or where does this story take place? One time you mention Anakin and now you are talking about Bastilla. There is about a 2000 year difference there. You really want a dark side campaign it seems. The sith lords basically hide and plan in the modern era so you may want to go back or forward in time. The Legacy comic timeline could work. Insert coin and try again.




DrAshgod

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#18 10 years ago
katanamaru;4816639There is about a 2000 year difference there.

4000 :p




Kalek_Dakar

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#19 10 years ago
katanamaru;4816639You also seem to be hung up on this notion that there has to be love/sex in your story.

Its probably some kid in the 6th grade that's why.




DrAshgod

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#20 10 years ago

LOL!? Isn't 6th grade too much? I say a 4th grader :rofl::p