a fourth grader couldn't write that. definitely a sixth grader. although i can't be too sure about kids these days... they say the darndest things.
P.S. - uh, is that really your story? needs major work.
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15th March 2005
Guy, stop trolling the OP and provide constructive criticism.
Since when is Jesus a Star Wars character?
SquishyTomato;4817702Since when is Jesus a Star Wars character?
It´s simply a freaking name for a character in a mod ...
[quote=Alpha 77;4815702] "How about Revan's son Becuse you know what revan does with bastila.I now think about a new story how about this. Story:(Five years later after Revan's disappearance)After five years Revan returned to the galaxy but all of the sith were destroyed the only one remeing was Bastila.When Revan returned he's first destenation was Korriban.Revan went to Korriban but it was under Republic control.Revan killed the Republic soldiers and entered the Sith Academy.It was filled with jedi masters.Revan destoyed evry jedi master in there.He searched for Bastila.Revan found her in one Force Cage.She was beat up realy good.Revan opend the force cage." ....are you serious? you probally dont know me, cause your a moron, but Hi im Anthony im making the real kotor mod KOTOR mod for Star Wars: Jedi Academy - Mod DB and i just wanted to say that your story sucks, like more then anything in the world "all the sith destoryed?" jedi master JESUS? could he heal others and was the son of the force?:confused: did revan fly in your story? was bastila really a chimp? your first story had STORMTROOPERS, are you that retarded? useally im not mean to people, but that was just so stupid, i hope its a joke i really do because if a mod comes out that retarded i will probally piss my pants laughing:rofl: anyway i will no longer waste either of our time, i have many things to do, and many people to make fun of. GOODBYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ps it wouldnt let me quote proberly so i just gave up and put "" at the begining of the quote and at the end