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JediMoo

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#1 13 years ago

Twas just a little something I decided to make. Reminder: This is not what I ACTUALLY think the KotOR 3 should be like, I was just bored and made this, that is based off of KotOR 2, and also, I made the Exile a guy, AND a lightsider, ^^ Chapter 1, Part 1: The Youngling Known as Kundaar Kundaar, a ten year old youngling to the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine, woke up to a very bright morning on the grass like planet. He got up, and went into his footlocker. Kundaar took his training saber, the color variety of green, also grabbing, and putting on his customary robes, of the jedi padawan. After he got dressed he walked out of his room, to be greated by Master Vrook, the man that had been teaching him, one of the last Jedi Masters, he had been teaching alot of the younglings. Kundaar also known Master Vrook, as the one who survived Kreia's small attack on the Masters. Master Vrook took Kundaar to the training chambers, which happened to be partially caved in, so only a few could train at a time. Master Vrook looked around the chambers, there had been much that had happened here, and Vrook was there for most of it. This had been where Revan was trained......Where the Exile was trained. Kundaar knew the Exile, as the man to defeat Darth Traya, or Kreia, as she was preferablly called by him. He was so tempted to save her, but she claimed to already have been saved. Nobody knows if Kreia really did go to the Dark Side, or if all of this was merely a test. She had claimed that she knew the future; perhaps she had seen the future, and already knew that the Exile could pass this test. Kundaar was thinking this the whole time Master Vrook had been explaining what he had to do for training. Kundaar was in deep thought about everything that he had been told, as he would be alot. He hadn't heard a word Vrook had said, but he had came out of his 'trance', and then starred at Vrook. Kundaar was ashamed that he had not been listening to his Master, expecially since this had happened alot. Master Vrook let out a small sigh, "Ever brash, ever disrespectful. You should be ashamed of yourself, you're a Jedi, you shouldn't let things so easily distract you."Vrook waited for Kundaar to say something, and a sad expression, spread accross his face. "I....I know Master Vrook, but I was just thinking of the Exile...."he said, and then Vrook immedietly added, "There is no reason you should be thinking of that, it has been done, you need not worry about it now, it's all in the past, but know is the present, and not the time to be dwelling on the past...."Kundaar thought, and Vrook was right, "I...I....I'm sorry, Master Vrook, you're right.....I should be focusing on my training, the Jedi are in need, and by dwelling on things that do not matter anymore isn't helping....Once again, I am sorry."Kundaar was very dissapointed in himself, and he looked at the ground. "You have no reason to be forgived for this act...THESE acts....But I'll let it go this time. Now, back to your training. I'll be teaching you the lightsaber stance, known as, 'Shii-Cho', a stance that is best against many opponents."Kundaar listened to every word, and soon his training began. Vrook explained to him, that this was one of the easiest lightsaber stances to learn. It had only took him about half an hour, to actually learn this stance, but he had not perfected it. Vrook told him he was to practice this stance the rest of the week, if he wished to learn this stance well. Kundaar spent all week training in this stance, and learning it well, it had been harder then he had thought, and he still was far from perfecting it, it was an easy stance, yet a hard one, too. After he was finished practicing, Kundaar immedietly reported to Vrook. "Good, young one. You have learned your first saber stance. Though you wont be able perfect it, for awhile, as you need to learn the others."Kundaar nodded. "What's next, Master?"he asked, as he whiped some sweat from his forehead. He was still very worn out from his training from the week, but he was willing to practice more, if that was what needed to be done. Kundaar thought, "If this is the easiest, I can't imagine how hard the hardest stance is...."Vrook thought a moment. "Though first, you will need some rest.....You can't expect to just go through all of these stances with no sleep at all, you'd die. Now go, get to bed..."Kundaar did as Vrook told him, all he did was nod, and walk to his chambers. He took of his jedi robes, and set them neatly into his footlocker. Kundaar climbed into his bed, and quickly fell asleep. He had the weirdest of dream; he was in the Trayus Academy Core....The place where the Exile, and Darth Traya, had fought. Darth Traya walked up to him, and said, "It is time the apprentice killed the Master....."then she dissapeared. Kundaar tossed and turned in his sleep, he had never had a dream like this. Then, the Exile, and Traya appeared infront of Kundaar, as did Malak and Revan. Revan and Malak fought each other, so did Traya, and the Exile. Kundaar backed up, and his eyes widened, as he saw Malak get struck down by Revan, and then seeing Traya dieing, because of the fight with the Exile. Kundaar was very scared seeing all of this, and at the same time he was wondering why he was haveing such a dream. Kundaar woke up, and sprung his torso right up. He whiped his head of sweat, he had been sweating more then when he was training. He looked out his window, it had still been night, from the looks, it was about Dawn. Kundaar lay back down, and went back to sleep.




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#2 13 years ago

Chapter 1, Part 2: Rough Training(Not finished yet) Kundaar woke up the morning after, ready to start a new day of training. He was going to tell Master Vrook about his dream, but then he decided he should hold it off for awhile, he had much training he was to go through, and he didn't want anything stopping it. He got dressed, and reported to the training chambers, where Master Vrook had been waiting for him. Master Vrook turned around, "Now, young one, I sha'll show you a more advanced stance. This stance, is called Makashi, this stance will be better use in lightsaber combat. I will now show you a demonstration."after Master Vrook had finished speaking, he immedietly showed Kundaar a example of the stance. Kundaar nodded, as Vrook said, "You have one month to teach yourself this stance. I also want you to teach yourself the move called, 'Flurry', a series of attacks from the jedi's saber."Kundaar got a little wide eye'd, this was much more work then he was expecting, and that disturbing dream; it didn't help at all. Vrook, once again showed a example, of the 'Flurry' technique. Kundaar nodded, he understood what he must do, he knew being a jedi would take much devotion, and he was dedicated to this task. Vrook rubbed his neck, "Young one, you look a bit, 'disturbed', is there anything wrong?"Kundaar was surprised that Vrook caught that; though at the same time, he wasn't, Vrook was a Master after all. Kundaar hesitated a moment, "No, Master Vrook, I'm fine, don't worry about it."he said, and Vrook nodded, though he doubted this. Vrook excused Kundaar to his training, but before Kundaar left, Vrook said, "Wait, there is one more thing that I wish to teach you, and for you to practice over the month."Kundaar was displeased with more work, but was still willing. "What is it, Master?"he asked, as Vrook jumped high into the air. "I wish to teach you how to use, 'Force Jump'. Center yourself, find yourself at peace, and channel the force, then jump as high as you can. Kundaar nodded, he started to focus himself, and he crouched down. Then, Kundaar jumped up, going half the height of the room, and landed on his two feet, though almost fell. "Now, I want you to practice that. Go off to your training, now."Vrook said. This would be very hard training for Kundaar, he had many things to learn, with only a month to do it all. Kundaar went through very serious training, it had been two weeks since Master Vrook assigned him these tasks, and he had spent two weeks learning the Makashi stance, and practicing it. He knew he hadn't gotten off to a good start, he had only two weeks left, to learn to keep his balance with 'Force Jump', and teaching himself how to do 'Flurry'. Kundaar decided he would start of with doing 'Force Jump'. It should take him less time then 'Flurry', so he would do this first. Kundaar jumped up, he landed, but then tripped, and fell. He picked himself up, and jumped up again, on his way down he tripped again. He couldn't keep his balance after he came to landing. Kundaar tried, and tried, but he kept falling. He decided that he would put 'Force Jump' to the side for now, and practice the 'Flurry' technique. He took out his training saber, and ignited, as his room glowed green. Kundaar let out a quick flurry of strikes out, it seemed easier then he was expecting. He kept swinging and swinging his saber, striking, slashing. He kept practice the technique for about three days. Kundaar decided, it was finnally time to try 'Force Jump'. He continued trying to jump, but still fell, but then inspiration struck. "Thats it! I know what I need to do now!"




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The rest of part 2 He was doing the most simple thing wrong; he wasn't useing the force to help himself land. Kundaar had been trying to land on his own, that was why he kept falling. He tried again, and jumped high into the air, and when he was about to land, he stretched his arms out, useing the force to balance himself. He landed, and this time he kept balance, instead of falling on his face. "Finaly, thats over...."he thought. For the rest of the time he had, he continued to progess on his force jump. Kundaar knew this would come to be very useful for him, so he thought it would be the best thing to start practicing on. At month's end, he came to the training chambers, and told Master Vrook, that he had done all he said. Master Vrook asked if he could please show an example, on the work he had. First, Kundaar took his saber out, and stationed himself in the Makashi saber stance. Then, he did the flurry of strikes, he dis-ignited his saber, and hung it back onto his belt. Kundaar crouched down, then jumped high into the air, on his landing, he stretched his arms, as he did before, and landed. Vrook clapped his hands, "Good, now its time for yo----" Chapter 1, Part 3: Small Assault on the Enclave (also not done) Vrook was cut off, from an explosion, from behind him. The back of the training chambers had been open, and a group of five Sith Assasins walked in. The five ignited their sabers, and the room glowed read, as it reaked of the Dark Side. It seemed these Assasins were well trained in the ways of the force. Three other Jedi from the Enclave ran into the training chambers, one ignited a yellow, another green, then another purple. Vrook ignited his blue saber, and then force pushed Kundaar out of the room. Vrook made a force sheild, blocking Kundaar from coming back in. Kundaar gathered all the younglings, and told them that they needed to evacuate. On their way to the front door, Kundaar looked at the shield, to see how Vrook was doing. One of the Masters was dead, and there were only three Sith left. Kundaar continued to lead the group of younglings to the front door, when they encountered seven Sith Assasins, though these ones only had polearms. Kundaar, and all the other younglings, ignited their sabers, and attacked the Sith. Kundaar threw one of the Sith of guard, and stabbed him through the stomach, then delt with about two others, as the other younglings had finished the rest of the Sith. They all walked outside of the Enclave, and found that they were blocked off by about twelve more, these ones had sabers, and it would be to risky for any of the younglings to fight them. Just then, Vrook, and two other Jedi Masters came out, behind the younglings, their sabers already ignited. "Flee young ones, we'll deal with these Sith!"Vrook said, as fast as he could. Kundaar nodded, and led the younglings past the Sith, as they charged at Vrook and the Masters. Kundaar looked back at Vrook, they had already killed several Sith, but the Sith had also killed one of the Masters. They were going to die. Kundaar starred, he knew he would have to help them. He showed the younglings the way to go, then he charged at the group of Sith, there were still about ten left, from what Vrook and the Master killed. Kundaar used a flurry of strikes, on one of the Sith cutting several amounts of his limbs of, then he stabbed another, and sliced through another. Vrook and the Master finished the rest off, and Vrook looked furious when he saw that Kundaar was helping them. "What do you think you're doing?! You're suppose to be with the young ones! What if they get killed, Kundaar?!"Kundaar had never seen Vrook so mad before, though he knew he had a rep for getting mad very easily; but he was right. Kundaar should have stayed with the younglings, they could be getting slaughtered right now, he wasn't thinking at the time. He turned around when he heard voices, five younglings, out of the thirty-five, that originated, were running twards them, with scratchs all over, and torn clothing. "Masters! We were ambushed by the Sith, there are still some survivors, fighting them off! Please, you have to go help them!"one of the younglings pleaded. Vrook looked even more angry then he had been before. The Master put his hand on Vrook's shoulder, "Come, Vrook, now is not the time. We have to get to the young ones, now. Youngling, can you show us the way?"the Master asked. The youngling nodded, and said, "Follow me."Kundaar also followed them, waiting to see what awaited him.




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#4 13 years ago

Shouldn't this be in an RPG or Fanfiction section, Since it is a story?




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#5 13 years ago

Sorry, >>. If someone with power could possibly move it, if you can do dat on this site, lol. Anyway, heres the rest of part 3: They came upon about eight Sith left, and about three younglings left, defending themselfs. Vrook, and the Master ran into battle, killing all of the Sith. Kundaar went up to the younglings and brought them over to the little group of younglings; there was eight. Vrook told the younglings to follow him, they couldn't go off on their own anymore, this attack was bigger than what Vrook was expecting. Kundaar nodded, as did the others, and they all followed to where he was going. Vrook, killing a few Kinrath and Kath Hounds on the way, he finaly found the Kinrath Cave. "You should be safe in here, young ones, I have Kinrath Glands, they wont attack you."Vrook handed all of them the Kinrath glands, and then the Master and Vrook took them deep into the cave. When they got to their destination, "Make sure you do not leave this cave, untill we come back."Kundaar and the younglings nodded. Kundaar was very tempted to just get up and go help them, but he knew that he would probaly just be getting in the way, so he remained where he was silentely, waiting for Vrook to come back.....Waiting to see if he did come back. Chapter 1, Part 4: Vrook, The Last Master of the Enclave Vrook had came back to the cave hours later, without the Master with him. He explained that all the Sith were gone, though the Master died in battle, so they would be getting much less training. But there were also much less of them. Eight students, and one Master, even at such a little amount of students, it would be hard to train all of them. Vrook took them back to the enclave, and said he had a schedule set up. After Vrook finished speaking the schedule, Kundaar noticed he was last to get trained. "Why am I last to get trained?"Kundaar was very confused, but then he remembered what he did when the Sith came. "The first reason, you got more than half of the Enclave's younglings killed, and the second reason, you've been getting the most training lately."Kundaar understood this, he was getting more training than the other students, and he was grateful for this. Kundaar went back to his chambers to go to sleep, as Vrook trained some of the younglings. Kundaar woke up, and stretched his arms out. He got dressed, grabbed his training saber and he was on his way, he knew that it was his turn in the training chambers. Kundaar walked into the training rooms, and Vrook awaited there, as expected, and then onother youngling walked in. Kundaar was a bit confused, but played a long. "Today, first, we are going to have a spar. You two against each other."Kundaar and the student nodded, and walked up to each other. The student striked to the left, then right, then an uppercut, Kundaar blocked both side strikes, then went into a force jump backflip. Kundaar ran up to the student, and striked at him head on, the student blocked, then Kundaar jumped over him and slashed at his side, the student blocked the attack again. The student pushed Kundaar back, with a force push, then jumped over and slashed down at him, while he was still on the grounded. They locked up, and Kundaar kicked the youngling, so he could break the lock, then as the student was falling back, Kundaar sliced his lightsaber in half, and Vrook ended the match. "Good, Kundaar, now I know that you are ready for the stance I am going to teach you. It's called Ataru, best used in battle against a single enemy."Vrook went into the Ataru stance, to show Kundaar how to do it. Kundaar nodded, "Kundaar, there is another thing I wish to teach you, it is called, 'Force Heal'."Vrook dropped into a meditative state, and healed himself. Kundaar couldn't see him heal himself, but he could feel it. "I want you to practice these over two weeks. As you've probaly figured out, it is one week for each. Kundaar nodded, he wasn't sure what to think then. Was force heal hard? Would it be harder than any other training he did? He didn't ask, he just nodded and walked out of the training chambers, and into his room. (Part 5 soon to come >>)




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#6 13 years ago

Great job I'm really liking this story, get part five up soon please :)




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#7 13 years ago

i would read that but that font is driving me crazy