okay i have started getting a new 40K army consisting of space marines, imperial guard sqads and an inquisitor lord. i have some new fluff and here it is: M36.856 the planet cybrus 8 was released from warp storms which had surrounded it for over 5,000 years M36.904 chaos forces landed on the planet and performed rituals to enhance these men so that they would be ideal for recruitment into the chaos army M37.214 Imperial forces landed on the planet and discovered men with all the enhancements of space marines on the planet, furthermore they discovered that men with these enhancement who had children always had children born with these enhncements. the imperial forces fought in a 500 year campaign against th forces of chaos for power over the planet and eventually inquisitor balthazar and his imperial guard were called in to fight the chaos armies back M37.750 the imperials under balthazar defeated the chaos legions and recruited a large portion of the planets population into their military. even the unenhanced individuals were recruited into an army of imperial guard. Inquisitor balthazar was elevated to th level of inquisitor lord as well as being given control of the entire Cybrien military. M38.302 Balthazar defended the planet from a huge tyranid invasion force by leading the vastly outnumbered imperials with utmost prcision successfully defeating a kraken splinter fleet despite having less than a third of the Tyranids numbers M39.201 Another splinter fleet was on its way and Balthazar called on help from the ordo xenos to repel them. together the two forces squashed the tyranids before they reachd the planet. since then the tyranids have frequently attacked the planet and the imperails based there have had to keep close ties with the ordo xenos to ensure their troops safety. im still working on this but could i get some feedbasck so i know what to add
are you making a map!?
Erm, no. He said it is an idea for an army. So, my guess is its an army, not a map. Nice fluff man.
'[FSFulgrim']are you making a map!?
what gave you that idea. i never mentioned a map and its in Table Top & Hobby Discussion
yer kool idea dont see any thing wrong wtih it
yay. i might make a longer redraft with a bit more to it but i will stick with the inquisition thing
Good job on that story
throw in a few crusade storys and it would be fine
Necron_guythrow in a few crusade storys and it would be fine
i might replace nids with chaos and make the whole army an inquisitorial crusadeing force because i remembered after writing the fluff that none of my friends collect nids [/INDENT]