no we gotta stick to the one that was already started. otherwise it owuld get too confuzing
excuse me my bubble is of a very high standerd and even has a granny bubble attachment ^^ why dont we start a new thread called the ultimate story of somthing and start a brand new one?
sounds good. but i love my little nugle buddy. and the new character must have a funny non-spacemariney name. like fonzy had.
Sheesh someone just do the first story!!, ok i will,...... 1)Fonzy after examining the Harlequin again again noticed something a bit strange ; an aquaila slipping out from her chest plate." Soo.." Fonzy growled " you're a Harlequin correct? But, why rescue me if i am your most beloved foe to vanquish ? Have I earned the Eldar's aquantince " . Then suddenly using his words as a distraction he fired off a charred plasma shot point- blank , immediatly killing the Callidus Assasin. " Loyalist Scum.. " Fonzy muttered then looking across the battlefield to see even Maugan Ra faltering beneath the Chaos forces and Imperial counter attack .Just as he was comprehending the situation an Eversor Assasin burst from the debris flanked by not one but, two arco flagellants , the day would not be easily won....
aND THE SECOND STORY....( sorry caps lock )
2) Commander Delvenoon stabilised his boosters and commenced his broadside bodyguards to open fire on these lesser people.... Hengel Skolt seeing that his prayer had been answered tried waving and yelling at the Xenos warriors but, to no avail because the Ethereals demise had brought anarchy to the alien invaders.The Kroot and Vespid leaders decided to wait for further instructions from the next Tau Ethereal . Although they wouldn't wait for long .... This had caused the fie warriors to go mad for they had never really thought for themselves at least, not like this .
So it came out that the Delvenoon ,pressed on by the whispers of gods he did not know or want to know, commanded his army to charge imperial lines and this would be his first and last ,free-choice, mistake....
Fonzy let loose a few rounds from his heavy bolter, the eversor assassins weak armor stood no chance, it was torn to shreds. Fony laughed, and stared deeply and effectionately into the pool of blood which was now the eversor assassins grave, he caught a glimpse of himself, and horror overcame him, hed changed, his skin was pale and wrinkled, his face was was flaking, and his eyes were dead. He could he hear his soul pleading him for freedom, tears poured down his crusted skin, and he felt it burn as it fell through the cracks, a sudden wave of fear came over him, he was frightened, terrified of what he had become..... Frustration took over, Fonzys eyes glowed red with rage, he let loose a furious scream and charged in to the battle between chaos and eldar. He tore through the backs of his fellow chaos men, randomly jerking his chainsaws round, cutting a huge path through the middle of them. Spotting the chaos lord Draklon he continued his reckless charged, brutally tearing his fellow marines to pieces. Draklon turned at the sound of horrific cries coming from behind, all he could see was marines being tossed in the air, and he could see his men breaking away in fear, he pleaded khorne for help..then a firm hand rested upon his shoulder, he turned to see the demonic mask worn by the sorcerors with and Draklon breathed sigh of relief. The foul creature muttered a few dark, penetrating words, and the retinue of berzerkers surrounding Draklon erupted in an explosion of blood, guts and scrap metal... strange, hideos beasts remainded in their place, huge compared to the rest of the army. The sorceror hissed that this was khorne's gift, a squad of bloodletters and their bloodhound allies. Fonzy now consumed by hatred lifted one of the marines high, and tore his torso armor off, before sinking his hand into his unguarded chest, striking between the ribs, he tore the corrupted heart out from the marine, and felt it swell before exploding under his powerful grip. Looking on, Fonzy saw the beasts of khorne, but this time he saw them with hatred, he drew his plasma pistol and fired a few bursts of plasma at them. These shots just missed and singed the cape of the chaos lord, he screamed with rage and ran through towards Fonzy. With a shy grin, Fonzy picked up his chain saw and let loose a vicous snarl as he tore through another three marines with a single movement...... Edit: ......someone Else Post, I Like My Story, Even If You Dont, Dont Be Selfish!! [COLOR=red]Two quick things:[/COLOR] 1) Please don't double post on purpose 2) If the thread is heading for death, then let it go. - SSA
'' Commence Fire'' stated more than asked Lord Inquisitor Staes . 'Yes , sir !" telling him that they obeyed after launching exterminatus on the doomed planet . GGGGGRRRRAAAHHHGGGGGGG thought Fonzy staring up wathcing the hells themselves descend upon this world . ''I willl not perish like this " he screamed amid the torn battlefield , quickly running towards the nearest Thunderhawk getting their only to find none other than his first master himself , the dreaded Lord...
Why is noone going Here!!!! AHHH! i share your pain Tyrant of Death! lol
Ill start a new thread called Fonzy story and well start over. thats that
kk , this is : [COLOR=black]DEAD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/COLOR]