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Quintus Dremille

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#1 12 years ago

All right, people...let's have a little fun. I want you to tell me a little about your own Jedi / Sith persona. Original Characters based on the SW Galaxy. Any time in SW History. My Jedi: Quintus Dremille, a Jedi Knight, born on the planet Corellia. Orphaned by pirates at the age of eight earned his way to Coruscant via freighter. Discovered to be Force Sensitive by Jedi Master Adi Gallia, and subsequently taken as her Padawan learner. Though not as talented in the many uses of the Force as the Jedi Masters, Quintus is an excellent swordsman having mastered six of the seven saber forms and one of few that have chosen to wield two lightsabers. His twin saber technique is nearly flawless and has proven to be out matched by only Masters Yoda, Mace Windu, and former Jedi Count Dooku.




blacklightning

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#2 12 years ago

Might as well give it a go.

Claire Redfield, an ex-Sith, born on the planet Horizon. Her planet had gifted the humans on it a long life, most living up to 500 years old. Her parents were killed during the night by muggers when she was 13 weeks old. Taken in by a young Anakin Skywalker when he heard a baby crying on a mission with Obi-Wan Kenobi. Nobody, not even Padme, knew about the baby who grew up to be his secret apprentice. When she was taken back to Coruscant, Anakin discovered her immense Force potential.

When she was 5 year old she had already mastered 3 saber forms and had constructed 2 single lightsabers and a doublebladed lightsabre. She also had learned most Force powers that Jedi could easily reach and also some others that even Yoda had struggled to learn. When Anakin turned to the Dark Side she helped him hunt down the remaining Jedi at last revealing herself.

Finally she discovered the Jedi Knight Halor Elit, who could see a month into the future before the shroud of the Dark Side had fallen. He told her that she had always sensed her during his time on Coruscant. He also revealed that the Emperor would attempt to have her killed and Anakin would turn on her. He said that Yoda on Dagobah would help her find the light again. Claire killed him not believing the Jedi's "lies". A month later 5 teams of Clone Commandos burst into her home on Coruscant at night. She killed 2 teams before fleeing and seeking Anakin, still not believing Halor.

When she found him Anakin accused her of treachery and tried to decapitate her. They fought a pitched battle until finally Anakin cut her doublebladed saber in half. She fled to the hangar bay avoiding stormtroopers. When she got the hangar Claire found that the only craft left servicable was an old Jedi Starfighter about to be dismantled. She ran over and when stormtroopers appeared sent a sphere of Force energy from her that threw anyone that got caught in it 50 metres to the opposite wall. She undocked and fought against dozens of TIE Fighters until 4 Star Destroyers started to close in. She jumped into hyperspace going through a random course of 15 planets and one nebula before arriving at Dagobah.

There Master Yoda trained her to use the Light side of the Force again. When Claire's training was complete she left to search the galaxy for any surviving Jedi and new ones to train. She eventually became an extremely useful asset to the Rebel Alliance. After the Emperor's defeat at Endor Claire settled down until the Vong arrived. During this rest she married an old Padawan called Lorne Eart who she lived with until he died. She fought and defeated the Vong many times. After that she left the galaxy and nobody saw her for 20 years when she reappeared with disturbing news.

Beat THAT!

Find out what the news was if I ever finish my fanfic. Which is unlikey as I'm only one chapter in. And that chapter is the prologue which is roughly... this lol, although the main fanfic starts a bit before this ends. All I will tell you is that Claire is the main character and will return to the Dark Side for around a quarter of the book when the new threat cause her to lose her soul. I know, kind of cheesy with the soul part but whatever. I work with what I get.




Jetty

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#3 12 years ago

wow this looks fun, I should invent my own jedi character.




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#4 12 years ago
blacklightningWhen she was 5 year old she had already mastered 3 saber forms and had constructed 2 single lightsabers and a doublebladed lightsabre. She also had learned most Force powers that Jedi could easily reach and also some others that even Yoda had struggled to learn. When Anakin turned to the Dark Side she helped him hunt down the remaining Jedi at last revealing herself.

Minus 20 points for complete unbelievability.

This game would be more fun to play if it wasn't restricted to Force wielders.




blacklightning

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#5 12 years ago
Inyri ForgeMinus 20 points for complete unbelievability.

:rofl: Well in the fanfic she's basically a superhero, even for Jedi. Then of course she goes evil along with one of her apprentices. Stop. I've said to much. Anyway the link to the prologue and first chapter is in my signature.




Chemix2

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Marcus Jacques: As a child he was taken to the jedi council, and was accepting into the order with relatively little skill in comparison to his fellow younglings. However later in life, he fell in love with a young woman, and then another and another and another, all these times held back by his jedi oaths, eventualy to the point where up and left the jedi temple, abandoning his master and going to live on Alderann. He continued his practice of the force for various simple things that a jedi teacher would get rather upset about. However one day he left for Korriban to visit the remains of the Sith temples there, and there he found sith tablets and learned the ways of the supposed "dark" side of the force.

With his new found knowledge he manipulated a spacefighter pilot to give him his fighter which he then used to plunder convoys of goods bound for corriscant, naboo and alderann. In bad dealings with the trade federation he was caught and locked in prison where he met another renegade jedi. She told him of her adventures as a pirate much like himself, however she had learned much more from the jedi than the sith and yet still turned to such. With life sentances they were both trapped for months before eventualy deciding to escape. Using the force they were able to manipulate their way towards pardons. They traveled together for some time before an issue came up? Who got what, and who decided who got what. At this point they "seperated" and by that I mean, Marcus was locked out of fighter and Yalin took off. Marcus on Alderann for the second time continued to read into the sith teachings up till the clone wars, where he was hired by the Confederation of Planets to act as a mercanary assasain.

In the war he became a rather difficult anoyance, killing off jedi knights one by one, up till the jedi master Mace Windu was sent to track him down, which he did eventualy, finding him held captive in a rodian prison on Correllia sentanced to die for being found "freeing" several twilek slave girls. He escaped the prison only to be caught by Mace, and engaged in saber duel thus. It lasted only a minute, with Mace as the victor, taking Marcus back to his ship and locking him in the hold there for a trip back to Corriscant for judgment. While at a stop in orbit above Alderann, Marcus ejected and went back to the planet he called home twice already.

Marcus was eventualy hired again at the end of the clone wars by the First Galactic Empire, to track down and detain Jedi's for "questioning" by Darth Vader. However his ventures to capture jedi's was short lived, as his third mission was to find Yalin, which he did, however he could not bringing himself to take her in after finding out the fates of the last two, he let her go and claimed that she had defeated him in battle as an excuse, an excuse not found worthy by the empire, they attempted to have him executed for failure but he escaped and then lived on Corriscant, in various apartments of those who would take him in, those who would take him in mostly happening to be attractive young women.




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#7 12 years ago

Gravis (or Darth Gravis, whichever you prefer)

This self-proclaimed Sith Lord rose to power some time after the eradication of Nihilus, Sion, and Traya, the last known remaining Sith. However appearances are always decieving.

Gravis, who adopted the name later in life, was born on the planet Iridonia. His life was one of constant strife as the various clans fought one another. He yearned to leave the planet, as many did, to become smugglers, pirates, or mercenaries. However this was not the path he was destined to take.

Eventually, after the defeat of the overpowering Paxis Crime Organization, Gravis was able to leave Iridonia, as he had always dreamed. It was at this time that he discovered what had always been a connection to the Force, a connection he had never had the opportunity to grasp before his departure from his homeworld. The Force beckoned him, called him to ancient Sith ruins. His Iridonian combat training served him well as he scavenged through what remained of what was once a vast Sith empire. He discovered the secrets of the Sith, and they resonated within him, echoing off of the pain of the hardships he had experienced.

For this Sith, the Force was a tool to compliment the talents he had already obtained as an Iridonian warrior. The Force strengthened him, gave him power, and with this power he meant to correct the wrongs that had been done to him and to his people. Already a master swordsman, Gravis never bothered constructing a lightsaber, but rather used an Iridonian blade. Coupled with the forsight of the Force it was just as deadly as any energy blade in his skilled hands.

No Jedi would spell out Gravis's undoing, but rather one of his own people, a non-Force user, would bring an end to his short-lived reign as Dark Lord of the Sith. However Gravis was never truly a Sith at all, but merely a pretender to the throne of the dark side.




CyberRaptor

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#8 12 years ago

Isn't Claire Redfield that chick from Resident Evil 2? She had a brother too...Chris Redfield.




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#9 12 years ago

Kyylo Zar - Born approx 3969 B.B.Y. Kyylo was a human female force sensitive, born on the wilderness planet of Gryyon. At the age of 2 her force energy attracted the attention of a small passing sith fleet captained by a low ranking sith lord. The sith stranger threatened Kyylo's father, saying that he would donate the girl to the sith empire, or else. Kyylo's father naturally refused and was killed by the sith right in front of her. It is believed that Kyylo had a living mother but she was no where to be found at the arrival of the sith on Gryyon. The sith brought her to the temple on a desolate planet in the outer rim and began ruthless training and torture to form her into a weapon of hatred. When she was 5 her teacher attempted to release her force potential through pain. He tried burning sith tattoo with his light saber on her right cheek. Kyylo was in so much pain that she unleashed a force push on her master, sending him flying across the room. After this display of power it was decided that she must undergo more intense training to foster her talents, so she was put aboard a sith vessel en route to Korriban however the ship never made it to its destination as the vessel was intercepted by a republic flagship. A space battle ensued and republic strike team boarded the ship led by Jedi Master Sorin Draz. The Jedi and republic soldiers plundered the ship taking dozens of prisoners, and Sorin came across a little girl. He looked upon her and he saw a frightened and innocent little girl who was ripe with the force. Master Draz took Kyylo to Dantooine and presented her to the Jedi council. At this point he had already developed a strong bond with the girl. The idea for her to be trained as a Jedi was initially denied by the council. Though she had an undeniable affinity to the force, she was deemed to be scarred, damaged, and full of fear and anger, and on top of everything else, too old. However Sorin convinced the council to keep her at the enclave for a few weeks so they could extract information from her about sith culture, its members, its custom, and locations. Kyylo proved exceedingly useful and over the course of her stay she opened up and the council sensed that her fear and anger melted away. With some more convincing by Sorin, the council decided that her talents could not be ignored, and she was admitted to the Jedi order for youngling training. Kyylo Zar was and exceptional student with many talents. She later became the apprentice of Sorin and flourished in the Jedi arts. She strived to join the ranks of a Jedi Guardian and practiced to master as many light saber forms as she could with the single saber. She befriended fellow apprentice Bastila Shan and played a vital role in the Jedi civil war. Such roles included part-taking in the capture of Darth Revan. A few years after she was knighted she was given command of one of ten Jedi strike teams that boarded Revan’s flagship. She commanded one of the largest strike teams (6 Jedi guardians including herself, 4 Jedi sentinals, and 2 Jedi consilers), whose task was the same as another 8 strike teams: to distract the sith from Bastila’s team while she used her famed battle meditation to advance to the bridge of the ship. Kyylo’s team killed many sith with minimal losses and was able to buy Bastila the time she needed, though the plan hit a snag when Malak arrived at the battle and fired on the ship. Kyylo’s team made for the bridge to find Revan unconscious and Bastila and her team injured and disoriented. Kyylo was responsible for getting Revan and Bastila’s team off the ship before it exploded.

This is all I have come up with for this character so far. I have some other ideas for her but nothing I'm ready to write down yet. I will say that her mother finds her, and I'm thinking Sorin will be one of the jedi to fight in the mandalorian wars and turn sith.