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Spyder F-16

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#1 14 years ago

Just a quick survey. I myself do. I'll have to type up a better one though.

[color=dimgray]Written by: "SSGT. SPYDER/ SPYDER-F16"[/color] [color=dimgray]Date Written: 2/11/2004[/color] [color=dimgray]Title: "Memories"[/color] [color=dimgray]Lyric:[/color]
I sit alone,
In my dark corner again
I deserved this shunning from you all
I lost my touch
Caused so much pain
I want to leave this place where I’m not wanted
[Chorus]:
Holding on,
To memories of a better time
Falling away,
From everyone around me
I live,
With the deepest
Regret
I reminisce,
To a time where everything was better
Lighter days, Just seem so far behind
To a time, where everyone was fine
What can I say?
Everyone just fit right in
Why did this change
For the worse?
[Chorus]
If only we could bring those feelings back
The world would be better
I hate these stereotypes that plague us everyday
I wish everything was better
No matter how impossible that seems to be
If we could find a way
We should take it
Holding,
To memories of a better time
Falling away,
Lets leave this hate behind
Forget everything,
That’s wrong in this world
Let’s make it right
Forget everything
That’s been done
Let’s go back to the time
Where everything
Was fine
Let’s go
Let’s go
(Oh…)
Let’s Go
Let’s Go
To the time
Where everything
Was
Fine



perry07

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#2 14 years ago

i wrote a song myself kinda perverted it sounds good with slow steady piano playing What should i do if my mushroom tip, if it goes drip, drip, drip, i dont wan to go to bed with a fright, so i should jack-off with all my might may i rest it on your lip? may i please, touch your hip? may i please, stroke your nip? so what do you do if your mush room tip, if it goes drip, drip, drip you dont want to go to bed with a fright so you must jack-off.......... with all......... of..... your............ might i warned you that it was perverted




Spyder F-16

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#3 14 years ago

That wasnt perverted ;)

I have written some songs about lesbians, and it gets REALLY perverted ;) :p




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#4 14 years ago

I spend some time writing songs, but never really finished any. I usually start with a drum beat, then add guitar notes. Lyrics are last because they are the easiest. Sometimes I write poetry then change some words so they rhyme.

"Crying out from a deserving hand A cresent comes to show, before we saw the burning land A song comes from a crow"




perry07

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#5 14 years ago

thats pretty good mEk :)




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#6 14 years ago

"The land that was once mine, Has nothing to show, The longer I see the signs, Everything moves slooooohooohooow"




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#7 14 years ago

well, i would...but i never seems to like what i write...

how long does it usually take you people to write a song?




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#8 14 years ago

The only things I write are rhymes on GF that are really lame, but i respect ppl who write songs :)




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#9 14 years ago
AegenemmnoNwell, i would...but i never seems to like what i write... how long does it usually take you people to write a song?

For the lyrics, usually it averages 10 mins on a good day. Btw, heres one I wrote this mornin:

Title: "Step Away" Composer: SSGT. SPYDER Date Written 3/22/04 Lyrics:
The morgue is dark and lonely
Much like my fucking dreams
The cobwebs everywhere around me
Reminders of only pain
Her boyfriend beat her down
She is battered and bruised again
I forget my worries
And only worry about her
You have your one chance to run away...
[Chorus]: Step away from her
You goddamn bastard
Who beats down, on his girlfriends
Step away, or I'll blow your head off
You're a fucking coward
You had your chance to run away
To live to see another day
You didnt change,
Now you have to die, to parish in hell
She came to me with tears in her eyes
Bruises all over her body
She said you promised you would change
But that's just another lie from you
Cuz your'e never gonna change
The bastard within yourself
She wants to believe in your hollow promises
All she gets is pain instead
[chorus]
You're gonna die today
If you dont step away
You're gonna die today
If you dont step away
You're gonna die today
If you dont step away
You're gonna die today
Unless you step away
Run away
Before I pump lead in your head
This .45 is locked and loaded
So dont tempt me to use it on you
Run away
You fucking bastard
Never come back to see her again
Never come back to see her again
Never come to see her again
or you'll die
or you'll die
You'll fucking die
[chorus]
I wont see you in heaven,
Cause you'll burn in hell...



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#10 14 years ago

i myself do, being a musician. currently working on a solo industrial/acoustic project...hopefully to have my own mini album done and released by next month. i'll post lyrics another time !