How many of yall here write songs? -1 reply

Just a quick survey. I myself do. I'll have to type up a better one though.

[color=dimgray]Written by: "SSGT. SPYDER/ SPYDER-F16"[/color] [color=dimgray]Date Written: 2/11/2004[/color] [color=dimgray]Title: "Memories"[/color] [color=dimgray]Lyric:[/color]

I sit alone,

In my dark corner again

I deserved this shunning from you all

I lost my touch

Caused so much pain

I want to leave this place where I’m not wanted

[Chorus]:

Holding on,

To memories of a better time

Falling away,

From everyone around me

I live,

With the deepest

Regret

I reminisce,

To a time where everything was better

Lighter days, Just seem so far behind

To a time, where everyone was fine

What can I say?

Everyone just fit right in

Why did this change

For the worse?

[Chorus]

If only we could bring those feelings back

The world would be better

I hate these stereotypes that plague us everyday

I wish everything was better

No matter how impossible that seems to be

If we could find a way

We should take it

Holding,

To memories of a better time

Falling away,

Lets leave this hate behind

Forget everything,

That’s wrong in this world

Let’s make it right

Forget everything

That’s been done

Let’s go back to the time

Where everything

Was fine

Let’s go

Let’s go

(Oh…)

Let’s Go

Let’s Go

To the time

Where everything

Was

Fine

i wrote a song myself kinda perverted it sounds good with slow steady piano playing What should i do if my mushroom tip, if it goes drip, drip, drip, i dont wan to go to bed with a fright, so i should jack-off with all my might may i rest it on your lip? may i please, touch your hip? may i please, stroke your nip? so what do you do if your mush room tip, if it goes drip, drip, drip you dont want to go to bed with a fright so you must jack-off.......... with all......... of..... your............ might i warned you that it was perverted

That wasnt perverted ;)

I have written some songs about lesbians, and it gets REALLY perverted ;) :p

I spend some time writing songs, but never really finished any. I usually start with a drum beat, then add guitar notes. Lyrics are last because they are the easiest. Sometimes I write poetry then change some words so they rhyme.

"Crying out from a deserving hand A cresent comes to show, before we saw the burning land A song comes from a crow"

thats pretty good mEk :)

"The land that was once mine, Has nothing to show, The longer I see the signs, Everything moves slooooohooohooow"

well, i would...but i never seems to like what i write...

how long does it usually take you people to write a song?

The only things I write are rhymes on GF that are really lame, but i respect ppl who write songs :)

AegenemmnoNwell, i would...but i never seems to like what i write... how long does it usually take you people to write a song?

For the lyrics, usually it averages 10 mins on a good day. Btw, heres one I wrote this mornin:

Title: "Step Away" Composer: SSGT. SPYDER Date Written 3/22/04 Lyrics:

The morgue is dark and lonely

Much like my fucking dreams

The cobwebs everywhere around me

Reminders of only pain

Her boyfriend beat her down

She is battered and bruised again

I forget my worries

And only worry about her

You have your one chance to run away...

[Chorus]: Step away from her

You goddamn bastard

Who beats down, on his girlfriends

Step away, or I'll blow your head off

You're a fucking coward

You had your chance to run away

To live to see another day

You didnt change,

Now you have to die, to parish in hell

She came to me with tears in her eyes

Bruises all over her body

She said you promised you would change

But that's just another lie from you

Cuz your'e never gonna change

The bastard within yourself

She wants to believe in your hollow promises

All she gets is pain instead

[chorus]

You're gonna die today

If you dont step away

You're gonna die today

If you dont step away

You're gonna die today

If you dont step away

You're gonna die today

Unless you step away

Run away

Before I pump lead in your head

This .45 is locked and loaded

So dont tempt me to use it on you

Run away

You fucking bastard

Never come back to see her again

Never come back to see her again

Never come to see her again

or you'll die

or you'll die

You'll fucking die

[chorus]

I wont see you in heaven,

Cause you'll burn in hell...

i myself do, being a musician. currently working on a solo industrial/acoustic project...hopefully to have my own mini album done and released by next month. i'll post lyrics another time !