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#1 4 years ago

for your enjoyment......or not

"I fell asleep with my friend Daniel, he wakes up earlier than me. I knew he would be up to helping me, he brought his lighter with him and some paper. Since I learned from him if you get burned while you are asleep it feels like someone is touching you in the dreamworld, I had asked him to burn me about an hour before I am awake. So there I was enjoying life, and I woke up with small burns in between normal skin and first degree. My girlfriend Nancy finally touched me. Sasha, the girl outside of my dreams, has never touched me."




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#2 4 years ago

Who the hell wrote that?


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#3 4 years ago

Needs more sex.


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#4 4 years ago

Needs more violence.


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#5 4 years ago

Needs more CGI.


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#6 4 years ago

Needs more bacon.


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#7 4 years ago

Needs more tuna.


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#8 4 years ago

Needs more creativity.


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#9 4 years ago

Needs more redundancy.


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#10 4 years ago

Needs more adult romance.


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