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RapidFire_Ryan56

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#1 16 years ago

I had a dream one night and it was so weird that I wrote a poem about it... Hope you like it...

1 person 2 3 dreams (one person to three dreams) A dream awaits me as I fall asleep. In my mind are pictures I keep. A night full of dreams, that's nice, like cookies-n-cream.

The first place I visit really looks exquisit. I'm working out in the gym, a man walks in saying I'm alot like him. I ask him his nameand he says "Hi I'm Tim." He said show me your pipe, I lift up my sleeve and think tight! Then I awake and feel really warm, I take one look at my arm and from the sight I saw, I just felt raw.

Right when I fall back asleep, I come to the next world. Now this I remember was very cold. I notice people coming after me, I pull out a gun and seem to shoot with glee. They keep coming forward and all I do is coward. Boy! did I run, it just wasn't any fun.

My next dream is kind of strange, It was really goofy and so out of range. There is a little green alien no bigger than some fingers. He just hangs around and lingers. I kept him in a 3 1/2 inch floppy disk, we communicated when there was no risk. I named the alien Flick, when I needed him he was there in a click. In this dream I felt reall strange, but I feel this green alien cannot be far out of range. The End By Ryan Walters.

So what did you guys think of it? please tell me...




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#2 16 years ago

.....strange




RapidFire_Ryan56

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#3 16 years ago

Yeah, well there's my dreams for ya...




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#4 16 years ago

The rimes are nice, but the timing is a little off. But that's just what I say and it's not my day.:D




RapidFire_Ryan56

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#5 16 years ago

well I'm no master poet(yet), but yeah it could use a little work< but I'm happywith it! :) thankls for replying! :) (please don't stop replying)




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#6 16 years ago

LOL, watch out Eminem:)




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#7 16 years ago

dreams are TOO wierd :lol:




Dutchman

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#8 16 years ago

Come on, relax a little He just tells us our dreams, that's all :rolleyes: rolfmao

Ok ok, now all knock it ok? omg, I'm still laughing :lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:

Well, RapidFire_Ryan56 don't mind me, I'm just a crazy fool :D




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#9 16 years ago

i still think i have the craziest dreams




Dutchman

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#10 16 years ago

I never remember my dreams, but if i remember one it's always something stupid what also could happen in real life...