Well heck, if some ppl r writing poems.....ill show u some of my old ones, mabye ill just attach em...lets see. First off, these are personal but i am trying to get them published so i dont give a rats if they are here aswell lol, hope u like them.
Sorry for all this pain I’ve caused Sorry for the love I paused Sorry for the kindness I’ve wasted Sorry for the pain I’ve concentrated On you Sorry
Sorry if I am wrong I have said enough and will be gone At the snap of the words that whip you back And with each deadly crack I’m sorry I lost control and gave my pain to you Which I should never do You are the one I love the most But you seem to be my pains host I can’t be here right now with all this hate And all this disturbance I will create I’m sorry
I live a life of arguments And all this anger vents On the wrong people and at the wrong times When you show caring I become one of those mimes All I do is sit there with my pain All those thoughts going threw my brain Makes me want to go insane And you sit there and care for me But all I do is flee I’m sorry
I can’t do what I want in my head But this is where I say to you and what you always say not to dread
For all this pain I’ve caused For all this hate I’ve created For all this good I’ve corrupted For you I’m sorry
filejune, maybe consider to also make a Poem forum.... :lol::lol::lol:
No KW, I'm not making fun of you here. I think the poems are great, compared to what I can it is a master piece :naughty::lol:
NOT BAD! Not bad at all.
thx, that was an old one.....ill get a new one for you (if ur really religious and take offense to opinions then dont read this:
Am I awake? I look to the sky Love and hate fill my mind Deaths healing Souls torment All I have left is faith Strong pillars of holy Have crumbled away Leaving the man to hold the roof from falling I have fell to my knees I have shed my tears For what? How can I judge you when your earthly messengers Are so blind? Angels of Missionary All I see is people of kind, but they condemn me for what I have done For how I have forsaken your only begotten son And they judge me because of the way I stare at them The look of my rags And the cross I bear doesn’t seem to deter them from sending me to hell Love of God What is that? Am I blind? Or have I just seen the true light God is there, but how shall we explain him Let us leave him to being the supreme deity he is Shall we make pictures of this God as being a sinning mortal? And shall we revere humans as being holy When we all are evil inside The holiest of all Were blind Can you see now? The pain and the forsaken rain Clouds the world, I cannot see the light For bliss has lost its mark, and I’m falling down So blind, so lost, in my own deadly cycle Blind as a man that cannot see I walk the streets bearing your cross For what? For all this hate that fill the eyes of the prejudice, for your son? I loved you god, I love you god But I cannot pick up this cross that I bear, it is to heavy a burden for me Shall I see again? Maybe, but for now I’m Blind
I am still My body is weak I moan and stress my lifeless limbs I am a different man My soul has been taken and ripped apart My life has tattered by small holes that slowly rip away at it My soul starves the truth My eyes see everything My heart feels the pain My mind knows the past Fallen is my soul, lost is the key Immortality is scattered because of my sin Tongues of Fire are licking at my feet The Golden Gates are so far away now I have fallen away My soul strives for right My eyes see the life I live My heart feels my own guilt My mind knows I sin Fallen is me, my body, mind and soul Life slips threw my had as if it were sand I slip in and out of worldly existence Faded is the mind Starved is the soul Blind is the eyes Cold is the heart of mine I have fallen, limbs so lifeless I have fallen, not to be risen again I have fallen, blind and crippled Fallen from the light I want to get up But I have fallen Forever I have fallen
you guys serius on the Poem forum:lol: :lol:
if u want, i dont see a need for it tho :)
then it will not hapen nice poems
yes, some nice poems you got there... Maybe make a new thread just for all poems and make it sticky icky... just a suggestion...